“We’ll probably save that for another time, then,” Arthur commented as he wrote the response down. “I wouldn’t want to try too many new things at once.”
“All right. That sounds like a plan.” Arthur was pleased to hear that Alfred was already planning on doing this more than once.
“Do you want to use toys?”
Alfred grinned. “I’m up for anything. And you can use any of our toys on me.”
“All right,” Arthur couldn’t help a smile himself at the American’s enthusiasm. “Do you want to have sexual contact, and if so, what kind?”
“Anything is fine!” Alfred was still quite enthused. “Hand jobs, blow jobs, fingering, full-on sex… whatever you want.”
Arthur nodded, pleased with this answer too. “Is it okay to give you marks? If so, where?”
“Um, maybe bite marks and hickeys?” Alfred offered. “And anywhere I can hide them. Like, under my clothes.”
“All right. And we’ve already established that we’re playing in private. Now, what are your safewords? Shall we use red and yellow?”
Alfred nodded. “That’s fine. I can remember those.”
“Good. And a nonverbal safeword?”
“How about snapping my fingers?”
“That’s just fine. Any relevant health concerns?”
“I don’t have any,” Alfred answered confidently.
“If I have any psychological triggers, they are…?”
“Hmm… none that I know of.”
“All right. We’ve already decided to use condoms if we end up having sex. So… is there anything else I should know about you, your needs or your desires?”
Alfred paused for a minute to think. “Well, I’m a little nervous, but I want to be able to make you happy. So let’s do this!”
Having finished writing down Alfred’s answer, Arthur looked up and smiled. “Good. Thank you for filling out the sheet with me, Alfred.” Then he added, “I want to make you happy, as well. Even if I’m doing something like giving you pain,” Alfred’s eyes looked nervous again, “I want to make sure you are enjoying the experience.” He gave Alfred a kiss on the cheek. “So just let me know if you don’t like anything I’m doing, all right?”
Alfred nodded, turning his head to kiss Arthur properly on the lips. “I’m not worried. But I’ll let you know, yeah.”
Arthur’s grin became more devious. “Then let’s go back to the bedroom, love.”
This is lovely, anon. Since I don't usually see USUK as a BDSM couple (I tend to think of their kinks not going beyond hand-tying and vibrators, but it's purely personal preference), it was a little strange to think of Arthur as a sadist, but you not only made it believable, but you still captured the real heart of this couple, and made them sweet and caring. I love how you got Alfred's embarrassment and hesitation to talk about it (because come on, that's Alfred), but managed to capture the intention of the prompt to have an open and honest discussion. And I like Arthur taking the lead and guiding, but not forcing. In things like this, communication is key, and I like to think Alfred and Arthur are usually good at communication, but this would be the one thing where Al would freeze up, so I loved the way Arthur coaxed him into talking, so they could both enjoy it.
Since this isn't really my kink, I probably wouldn't personally want to read the smut scene (though other people would, so if you had considered it, please write it, I'm sure you'd do great!), but I would LOVE to see your version of what happens after. If the preparation is this sweet, I'm sure the afterglow would be even better (and if you've written anything like that, especially on the meme if you don't want to de-anon yet, PLEASE send it my way!)
Yay! UKUS! Can never have enough of that. You did an excellent job with the dynamic of their relationship, as I see it. I really like the way things turned out with their conversation, even more so that Arthur ended up writing for Alfred--that part was a very nice addition I wouldn't have expected.
I would love to read what happens next! Beginning, middle and end of this would be rather special.
I'm personally very fond of the idea of usuk engaging in BDSM and this discussion was exactly how I would imagine them going on about the stuff for the first time. I liked that you kept it serious and real yet the affection between them is still strongly visible.
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What Do I Want? [3/3]
(Anonymous) 2012-12-08 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)-----------
“We’ll probably save that for another time, then,” Arthur commented as he wrote the response down. “I wouldn’t want to try too many new things at once.”
“All right. That sounds like a plan.” Arthur was pleased to hear that Alfred was already planning on doing this more than once.
“Do you want to use toys?”
Alfred grinned. “I’m up for anything. And you can use any of our toys on me.”
“All right,” Arthur couldn’t help a smile himself at the American’s enthusiasm. “Do you want to have sexual contact, and if so, what kind?”
“Anything is fine!” Alfred was still quite enthused. “Hand jobs, blow jobs, fingering, full-on sex… whatever you want.”
Arthur nodded, pleased with this answer too. “Is it okay to give you marks? If so, where?”
“Um, maybe bite marks and hickeys?” Alfred offered. “And anywhere I can hide them. Like, under my clothes.”
“All right. And we’ve already established that we’re playing in private. Now, what are your safewords? Shall we use red and yellow?”
Alfred nodded. “That’s fine. I can remember those.”
“Good. And a nonverbal safeword?”
“How about snapping my fingers?”
“That’s just fine. Any relevant health concerns?”
“I don’t have any,” Alfred answered confidently.
“If I have any psychological triggers, they are…?”
“Hmm… none that I know of.”
“All right. We’ve already decided to use condoms if we end up having sex. So… is there anything else I should know about you, your needs or your desires?”
Alfred paused for a minute to think. “Well, I’m a little nervous, but I want to be able to make you happy. So let’s do this!”
Having finished writing down Alfred’s answer, Arthur looked up and smiled. “Good. Thank you for filling out the sheet with me, Alfred.” Then he added, “I want to make you happy, as well. Even if I’m doing something like giving you pain,” Alfred’s eyes looked nervous again, “I want to make sure you are enjoying the experience.” He gave Alfred a kiss on the cheek. “So just let me know if you don’t like anything I’m doing, all right?”
Alfred nodded, turning his head to kiss Arthur properly on the lips. “I’m not worried. But I’ll let you know, yeah.”
Arthur’s grin became more devious. “Then let’s go back to the bedroom, love.”
Not!OP
(Anonymous) 2012-12-08 11:40 pm (UTC)(link)Since this isn't really my kink, I probably wouldn't personally want to read the smut scene (though other people would, so if you had considered it, please write it, I'm sure you'd do great!), but I would LOVE to see your version of what happens after. If the preparation is this sweet, I'm sure the afterglow would be even better (and if you've written anything like that, especially on the meme if you don't want to de-anon yet, PLEASE send it my way!)
Great work again!
Re: What Do I Want? [3/3]
(Anonymous) 2012-12-08 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)I would love to read what happens next! Beginning, middle and end of this would be rather special.
OP
(Anonymous) 2012-12-10 04:47 am (UTC)(link)Re: What Do I Want? [3/3]
(Anonymous) 2012-12-10 05:48 am (UTC)(link)