Help? Oh, honey this was stellar. The poetry in your writing is fantastic. It was very riveting. I kept wondering how it would be resolved, and you kept me interested through to the end.
There were a few places where I wasn't sure who was saying/thinking what. But, I think that was part of the nature of the format you used. All in all it was very good.
Oh, oh, thank you so much, anon, for the compliments and concrit! You have just made my day. It was my first time writing like this and I had no idea how to pull it off- but I'm happy you found it interesting!
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
Re: Sky's the limit (Part 7/7)
(Anonymous) 2013-06-03 02:02 am (UTC)(link)There were a few places where I wasn't sure who was saying/thinking what. But, I think that was part of the nature of the format you used. All in all it was very good.
A!Anon here
(Anonymous) 2013-06-03 03:16 am (UTC)(link)