Mat, I’m out with Tino. Won’t be back until after dinner. Don’t call. Lulu
Lukas, who had locked himself up in the bedroom after Mathias let him go, had left that note on the fridge when Mathias went to take a shower. It was redundant, of course, because Mathias already knew. Maybe Lukas was trying to pull his nerve. Maybe Lukas was thinking of breaking up with Mathias. Maybe Lukas was about to cave, and he’s avoiding Mathias because he hates seeing his beloved Mat sad.
Yeah. That’s it.
Lulu’s about to cave, and Mathias had to be the one to coax him. And Mathias knew his Lulu better than anyone else. He started to formulate a plan.
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“Ber and I were thinking of adopting a kid. We’ve been married for 3 years, for fuck’s sake! Besides, Hana isn’t really a kid. She’s a dog, and while she’s really really cuddly, she doesn’t really require us to look after her, you know?” Tino babbled. “Besides, we had to look after my cousin’s baby a while ago and she was such an angel! She giggled over everything and Hana was just so in love with her! Speaking of love, how are you and Mathias?”
“Not well. I’m mad at him.” Lukas replied monotonously.
“What do you mean, ‘not well’? Why are you even mad at him?”
“He took me to a bar for our anniversary.”
“So?”
“He flirted with a girl.”
“What?”
“He flirted with a girl.”
“How are you even sure he was flirting with her?”
“Tino, he kissed her.”
“How do you know he consented?”
“I don’t.”
“Then why are you mad at him?”
“Because he was ignoring me.”
“Did he apologise?”
“Numerously.”
“Then why are you still mad?”
“Because that’s not acceptable.”
Tino sighed and sipped his coffee. He looked at Lukas and noticed a flicker of guilt run through his eyes.
“Wouldn’t you be mad if Berwald did the same?” Lukas questioned.
“I suppose. But I would have forgiven Ber if he apologised.”
Lukas stared at his hands and took a deep breath.
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ack this is probably not what op expected, but i promise you i'll get to the sexual favour soon. i just couldn't resist the temptation of weaving in some sufin in there. this was a really dialogue heavy part, sorry. i'm accustomed to writing poetry. do tell if my norway or denmark are ooc, this is seriously my first time writing them. it's slowly getting there, slowly. i think there'll be 2 or 3 more parts, but i'm not sure yet.
Personally, I think it's a definite improvement that the fic doesn't only follow the plot step by step but has some added depth to the plot. Norway with Finland also happen to be my favourite Nordics bff so I'm pleased you included them.
Definitely loving this fill and the direction you're taking with it. I like the unexpected SuFin reference, and friendly Norway Finland moment. Leave it to Finland to dish out advice in that particular fashion. Sneaky Fin, want to make Norway feel guilty with really trying.
What gets me is the fact that Norway signed the note Lulu. That's...that's...the cutest thing ever! And, it kind of shows that however made he is at Denmark, he still loves him. A lot. He's just such a tsundere. Poor boys.
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Death by Silence (3/?)
(Anonymous) 2013-05-06 10:33 am (UTC)(link)I’m out with Tino.
Won’t be back until after dinner.
Don’t call.
Lulu
Lukas, who had locked himself up in the bedroom after Mathias let him go, had left that note on the fridge when Mathias went to take a shower. It was redundant, of course, because Mathias already knew. Maybe Lukas was trying to pull his nerve. Maybe Lukas was thinking of breaking up with Mathias. Maybe Lukas was about to cave, and he’s avoiding Mathias because he hates seeing his beloved Mat sad.
Yeah. That’s it.
Lulu’s about to cave, and Mathias had to be the one to coax him. And Mathias knew his Lulu better than anyone else. He started to formulate a plan.
-
“Ber and I were thinking of adopting a kid. We’ve been married for 3 years, for fuck’s sake! Besides, Hana isn’t really a kid. She’s a dog, and while she’s really really cuddly, she doesn’t really require us to look after her, you know?” Tino babbled. “Besides, we had to look after my cousin’s baby a while ago and she was such an angel! She giggled over everything and Hana was just so in love with her! Speaking of love, how are you and Mathias?”
“Not well. I’m mad at him.” Lukas replied monotonously.
“What do you mean, ‘not well’? Why are you even mad at him?”
“He took me to a bar for our anniversary.”
“So?”
“He flirted with a girl.”
“What?”
“He flirted with a girl.”
“How are you even sure he was flirting with her?”
“Tino, he kissed her.”
“How do you know he consented?”
“I don’t.”
“Then why are you mad at him?”
“Because he was ignoring me.”
“Did he apologise?”
“Numerously.”
“Then why are you still mad?”
“Because that’s not acceptable.”
Tino sighed and sipped his coffee. He looked at Lukas and noticed a flicker of guilt run through his eyes.
“Wouldn’t you be mad if Berwald did the same?” Lukas questioned.
“I suppose. But I would have forgiven Ber if he apologised.”
Lukas stared at his hands and took a deep breath.
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ack this is probably not what op expected, but i promise you i'll get to the sexual favour soon. i just couldn't resist the temptation of weaving in some sufin in there. this was a really dialogue heavy part, sorry. i'm accustomed to writing poetry. do tell if my norway or denmark are ooc, this is seriously my first time writing them. it's slowly getting there, slowly. i think there'll be 2 or 3 more parts, but i'm not sure yet.
Re: Death by Silence (3/?)
(Anonymous) 2013-05-06 10:42 am (UTC)(link)No worries, the fic is going more than well.
OP
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(Anonymous) 2013-05-07 01:41 am (UTC)(link)a!anon
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