Oh God, Alice, do you eat babies for breakfast and sacrifice critters to the Dark Lord Satan? Do the statues in the church start bleeding when you enter, holy water turning to black pools of the void between the stars, do the passers-by turn to monstrous mutants and arrange their fetid bodies into groups of six, six, six? Do your eyes envelop the onlooker, is your laugh an unhallowed screech of a million damned souls, do your teeth drop venom as your words do--and finally, do your pom-poms serve to invoke Beelzebub Lord of Flies unto the Earth to join you in Cheerleading for your brother of dubious sexuality?
...because holy shit, are you a BITCH.
(Ehem. Despite the incrediby bitchy female role, I really like where this is going. I like how you characterized Den, and Iceland was also nice--he's a difficult character to write, and I think you got the cold-exterior-that-hints-at-something-else pretty well! Keep up the good work!)
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Re: I Do (2b/?)
(Anonymous) 2013-03-30 01:09 am (UTC)(link)...because holy shit, are you a BITCH.
(Ehem. Despite the incrediby bitchy female role, I really like where this is going. I like how you characterized Den, and Iceland was also nice--he's a difficult character to write, and I think you got the cold-exterior-that-hints-at-something-else pretty well! Keep up the good work!)