I think the flow of your writing is perfectly fine, no matter what someone above said. I also think the reasons why he doesn't just shake the other off are perfectly plausible.
Good work, I hope you continue this! DenSu isn't really a pairing I like, but a deep intake on rape without magical healing cock seemed like a good idea, so I'm curious as to how this progresses.
The first anon here. You're making assumptions I never though of,but I would thank you if you put this energy onto something more meaning.I Never said woman can't rape man,nor did I mention that mans couldn't be victims of rape. But when author!anon mentioned his sexuality, the canter of this discussion shifted a lot, while I wasn't talking about him or other rape cases. I was talking about the character through out the thread. I don't want a violent rape scene,either.But provided the setting that they're old nations, I couldn't imagine him or other APH characters think it wrong to fight back when he's gonna exposed to a sex assault,just because he fears to hurt his "people." If he's underwent many wars and mishaps, he couldn't not know how to deal with a sex criminal.
And please don't act like only you know rape,I'm not here to have a discussion on this matter, so I didn't say that much, but that didn't mean i'll hurt or laugh at the victims,ok?
For one thing, people don't always react to rape the same way they would to other kinds of violence. For two, knowing logically that fighting back is okay doesn't necessarily cancel out mental blocks that someone might have against causing harm (in general or against their assailant specifically). None of this, btw, has anything to do with being a girl. You obviously don't know rape as well as you think you do.
And I didn't see writer-anon say anything at all about his/her sexuality. What the fuck are you on about?
Please stop trying to defend imposing your interpretations on this fic, especially when the author has ended the conversation. If you do want to continue anything from this line of discussion please take it elsewhere.
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Not OP
(Anonymous) 2013-02-15 01:36 pm (UTC)(link)It actually enrages me that people just assume that rape alway has to be violent. If you extend that thought it ends up meaning that, for example, a woman can't rape a man, and that is complete bullshit. It's the same old cliché working mind that makes men not being taken seriously when they are victims of domestic violence. And that makes me physically sick. Thus, I really appreciate that you have enough guts to use non-violent rape in this, even though some dickheads are unable to understand that such a thing exists.
Good work, I hope you continue this! DenSu isn't really a pairing I like, but a deep intake on rape without magical healing cock seemed like a good idea, so I'm curious as to how this progresses.
(frozen comment) Re: Not OP
(Anonymous) 2013-02-16 03:56 am (UTC)(link)I don't want a violent rape scene,either.But provided the setting that they're old nations, I couldn't imagine him or other APH characters think it wrong to fight back when he's gonna exposed to a sex assault,just because he fears to hurt his "people." If he's underwent many wars and mishaps, he couldn't not know how to deal with a sex criminal.
And please don't act like only you know rape,I'm not here to have a discussion on this matter, so I didn't say that much, but that didn't mean i'll hurt or laugh at the victims,ok?
(frozen comment) Re: Not OP
(Anonymous) 2013-02-16 04:13 am (UTC)(link)For one thing, people don't always react to rape the same way they would to other kinds of violence. For two, knowing logically that fighting back is okay doesn't necessarily cancel out mental blocks that someone might have against causing harm (in general or against their assailant specifically). None of this, btw, has anything to do with being a girl. You obviously don't know rape as well as you think you do.
And I didn't see writer-anon say anything at all about his/her sexuality. What the fuck are you on about?
(frozen comment) Re: Not OP
(Anonymous) 2013-02-16 08:42 am (UTC)(link)(frozen comment) Re: Not OP
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(Anonymous) 2013-02-16 11:07 am (UTC)(link)(frozen comment) Re: Not OP
(Anonymous) 2013-02-16 11:17 am (UTC)(link)(frozen comment) Re: Not OP
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