Ahh, I love this. The characterizations are too perfect, and I found myself falling into the story with the characters. This anon isn't big on the romance genre, but this fill is very promising. The whole setting has been shaped out nicely, and an actual plot seems to be forming. Turkey's character is pretty awesome - the tough love kind of attitude.
But what would make this anon reeeallly happy would be if Lovino Vargas was added to the story. Paired or unpaired, I need to see his character with your writing.
Thanks,anon! Oh, Lovino might make an appearance or two, though he graduated two years ago and is off doing whatever one does with a M.A in Religious Studies.
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Re: The Love Song of F.Vargas.
(Anonymous) 2014-02-04 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)But what would make this anon reeeallly happy would be if Lovino Vargas was added to the story. Paired or unpaired, I need to see his character with your writing.
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(Anonymous) 2014-02-04 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)