This is everything I asked for and more, all wrapped up in wonderful writing and beautiful characterization.
You hit everything I wanted to see, both in the actions and the introspection. Your detail is excellent. I could picture the scene perfectly (I was especially touched by the changing of the guards-- I've seen the Americans carry it out at Arlington and it was one of the most moving things I've seen in my life, and you captured those feelings perfectly).
I love Canada, and I love the FACE family, and seeing them handled so well in such a serious way made my night. Everyone all together at the end was the perfect way to end this, and France and England and America taking their turns as well-- I can't gush enough.
This was the best fill I've ever received. Thank you so much for putting your expertise to this and giving me something so authentic and heartfelt. I love this, I don't think I can express it enough.
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(Anonymous) 2012-05-07 03:13 am (UTC)(link)You hit everything I wanted to see, both in the actions and the introspection. Your detail is excellent. I could picture the scene perfectly (I was especially touched by the changing of the guards-- I've seen the Americans carry it out at Arlington and it was one of the most moving things I've seen in my life, and you captured those feelings perfectly).
I love Canada, and I love the FACE family, and seeing them handled so well in such a serious way made my night. Everyone all together at the end was the perfect way to end this, and France and England and America taking their turns as well-- I can't gush enough.
This was the best fill I've ever received. Thank you so much for putting your expertise to this and giving me something so authentic and heartfelt. I love this, I don't think I can express it enough.