I love the whole thing, from Arthur's snarky but hopelessly in love POV, the references to Sherlock Holmes (discombobulated omg), Alfred proving himself in the way he showcases his love, the dorky invasion references (can't say enough of that!)
You manage to write something so hot, something so endearing, something realistic (the two boys bickering, so unmistakably silly and boyish. the two feel so real like people in the flesh, with their own characters), without being overly sappy! You're so awesome!
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Re: Rolling Over, Dover (Part 7 of 7)
(Anonymous) 2012-02-11 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)I love the whole thing, from Arthur's snarky but hopelessly in love POV, the references to Sherlock Holmes (discombobulated omg), Alfred proving himself in the way he showcases his love, the dorky invasion references (can't say enough of that!)
You manage to write something so hot, something so endearing, something realistic (the two boys bickering, so unmistakably silly and boyish. the two feel so real like people in the flesh, with their own characters), without being overly sappy! You're so awesome!
Great job! Thanks so much for sharing!