I'm so, so happy you updated this; it totally made my day to come back to it after this weekend. The end was just as it should be: fun, sexy, as easy as the decision was to get into the foursome to begin with. You've taken a very casual, practical approach to the entire thing that makes it much more realistic to me. I mean, seriously - how else do you figure out the logistics of this if you don't ask? Poor America, the burden fell to her. XD XD
And with the imperfections, this was hot. Italy going down on America just... guh. Okay, I might convert to that pairing. Holy hell. And then leaving it to our imagination, what Russia and Italy were up to - sexy omg what. You really took us into America and played up the fun part of a foursome (that not-knowing, that new mixed with old). It works real well. Also, Germany x America... hyyynnghh.
... Germany, why so adorable. XD XD I LOVED HIS DIALOGUE. EVERY BIT OF IT. TOTALLY STOLE THE WHOLE PIECE.
And then how it develops. >3
This was awesome, and... I'm sad to see that it's ended. T_T But so, so glad you took the time to fill it. ♥ ♥ ♥
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Re: 4 [4f/4] (END)
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I'm so, so happy you updated this; it totally made my day to come back to it after this weekend. The end was just as it should be: fun, sexy, as easy as the decision was to get into the foursome to begin with. You've taken a very casual, practical approach to the entire thing that makes it much more realistic to me. I mean, seriously - how else do you figure out the logistics of this if you don't ask? Poor America, the burden fell to her. XD XD
And with the imperfections, this was hot. Italy going down on America just... guh. Okay, I might convert to that pairing. Holy hell. And then leaving it to our imagination, what Russia and Italy were up to - sexy omg what. You really took us into America and played up the fun part of a foursome (that not-knowing, that new mixed with old). It works real well. Also, Germany x America... hyyynnghh.
... Germany, why so adorable. XD XD I LOVED HIS DIALOGUE. EVERY BIT OF IT. TOTALLY STOLE THE WHOLE PIECE.
And then how it develops. >3
This was awesome, and... I'm sad to see that it's ended. T_T But so, so glad you took the time to fill it. ♥ ♥ ♥