OSAuthornon is very sorry for being on hiatus these past few days, but I got sick from a kid I was babysitting and lost all will to write...
I hope you lovely anon's can forgive me da?
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England was worried. Alfred could tell. Not long after he had arrived, there had been a murder in Whitechapel. Not surprising, but this was the third murder in just a few months. Alfred smiled darkly. Emma had been first. He had watched her murderers, knowing she would be unable to identify him as anything but a teen. America officially left a few days later.
A young American rented a flat in London Proper.
Martha was next, 39 holes in her young body. Very Julius Caesar, but something was missing. He sighed and moved on, leaving her behind and cleaning himself. He sat in his rented flat, toying with the knife tip. He wanted something… beautiful. But Nothing flashy like a stupid cultist. Those fools made him want to wring their misguided necks and toss them to the Devil’s true body to be torn asunder.
Mary was a name he truly detested. He found his calling as he silenced her with two slashes. Her neck opened in a lovely red grin as he ripped open her lower stomach and sliced the rest. He still felt something was missing though. But what could it be? He had found the most beautiful way to slice them. He frowned thoughtfully as he decided to try again.
Annie was a pretty girl he decided as he ground darker color into his hair and put on his oldest suit. He silenced her with two cuts as well. He tore into her abdomen and stole what he wanted. That eased the feelings, but still… He wanted this to be perfect.
Elizabeth was an accident. He hadn’t intended to kill her, he couldn’t place why she was unsuitable, but had been able to silence her easily once she caught on to his true nature. He found a better one just a little later.
Miss Catherine was perfect. He cut her open and took the original as well as a kidney and part of the apron she wore. This should work. But it was later that he realized he wasn’t sated. He dropped the apron near some graffiti and continued on.
He growled and took his knife. He had to get this right.
Mary again. He slinked into her room, catlike. He was angry as he tore into her. He destroyed her face and removed her organs. He didn’t want any. Except… Her heart was beautiful. He lifted it, turning it side to side. Yes… This was what he wanted. What he needed. His craving for blood and death.
Usually he worked through people. Giving them tools and letting them fall to their dooms. But there was nothing, nothing like taking a life with his own two hands. He smirked as he went home, glass jars filled with formaldehyde. One with a kidney and two with a uterus. And one bearing a perfect perfect heart.
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“You know…” Piotr comented softly, turning purple-blue eyes to Alfred. Alfred smiled back at the Alaskan representative, “I always wondered where you got these. They are so well-preserved.”
“I picked it up in Whitechapel,” Alfred replied, smiling.
I know it's a little different from our usual work... Alfred doing something so violent... But we had to get away from the mushy stuff before we became too nice~ I'm not a nice guy~ I'm the devil for Hell's sake! And you're a deliciously evil one~XD Damn straight!
Awesome~ Be sure to purchase your ticket at the nearest awesome fill/request of awesome proportions~ Such as Shota!fills or some hard-core stuff like that FCGB~ ... Don't encourage him... orz
And we aren't sure~ The next chapter is being plotted~ But miss Sloth here got herself kicked off the computer again... I'm so proud of her for breaking one of the Commandments~<3
Your are an amazing writer! The way you described what was going on in Texas reminded me of an old western IDK why it just did! All of them get you in the feel of whats going on I REALLY enjoyed this.
I do hope we get to see Russia, not just because I like AmeiRuss (I do~) but also because Russia in canon is a demon/works for the devil/is evil enough to be summoned by Engalnd when he wanted a monster instead.
And England seems to dabble in both dark and light magic...but since he has so many cute magic friends its my headcanon he dabbles usually in light one more. So I cant wait to see what happens (and the states reactions) and who REAL America is. I still think his possessed...due to an old indian curse. Which reminds me are you gonna use the whole Indian curse on the presidents? http://www.snopes.com/history/american/curse.asp
Actually the first thing you wote...it seems like your getting to that in the story. Like if you pulled that out of the story and now are getting to the point where England knows about it and I just cant wait to read it!
I am not the OP but...I hardly ever see IL in here. Im not bitching about my state never being here Im just saying...perhaps Illinois could be a place he strikes? We have that whole Resurrection Mary and were popular for the mob at one point (not good I know but still...) and Im sure youd be able to find a bunch more that are ten times more original then mary!
Friend: Perhaps a mental asylum or him driving someone crazy? those past mental asylums were awful and patients sicknesses were often blamed on positions/the devil...it be pretty cool to see Al's reaction to this!
Friend 2: Im interested in seeing who the /real/ America is the the continuation of that first scene *crosses fingers and hopes Arthur finds real America after discovering this is the actual devil who apparently pretended to be a kid/break away?* o.o?y/n?
I am /not/ pushing this on anon. I just figured it be nice if I could help you :) sorry if I come off as pushy and please feel free to do whatever you want with it.
I LOVE her asylum idea! May I added haunted houses?
^^ seems a bit long and all but it says something on the devil and IL right away! I found this especially great apparently the devil has /chairs/ everywhere: Peck Cemetery, near Cerro Gordo, Illinois, has a Devil's Chair of its own. This one was supposedly erected by satanists, to give the devil a place to sit and observe their antics after they'd summoned him. Peck Cemetery, near Cerro Gordo, Illinois, has a Devil's Chair of its own. This one was supposedly erected by satanists, to give the devil a place to sit and observe their antics after they'd summoned him. (Reports are mum on whether or not he enjoyed a cold beer during the show.) There are a string of legends surrounding it, including that anyone who has dared to sit in the chair has died within a year thereafter. Supposedly, it's always several degrees colder in the cemetery, and people who have ventured there at night have been driven away by robe-wearing figures. BUSBYS CHAIR OMG is that how England found out??? Website/other chairs found here: http://firefox.org/news/articles/777/1/The-Devil039s-Stuff/Page1.html I cant get the image of England finding out that his chair is the devils and that the devil is al...and that leads to a confrintation...annnnd >.<; YOUR STORIES TO GOOD
So thats it. Umm please do feel free to add anything! Its just I felt a bit guilty asking but not giving >.<;
"Has anyone seen my Chair?" Alfred asked the kids. A chorus of 'no's surrounded him. He sulked, making his way to the meeting room. He heard yelling and peeked in to see a rather bewildered Russia sitting on the remains of a very familiar chair.
"RUSSIA!" He yelled, bursting into the room, "WHAT WERE YOU DOING SITTING ON MY CHAIR?!"
"Oh, Hello Comrade~" Russia smiled innocently, "I just thought your chair was looking more comfortable than usual. So I decided to try it out."
"Oh~" Alfred nodded, smiling at him cheerfully, "Next time wait for me to get here first and ask me Okay?"
hah XXDD and they think its just a normal chair! england must be freaked out when it just randomly disappears...for some reason demon!russia and devil!america are just awesome! omg i just realized it RUSSIA KNOWS ABOUT AMERICA *facepalm* wait more comf- omg was something sacrificed ;A;
No... but the description states that Busby died in the chair and his soul kinda lingers around... so... it's kind of like when Russia sits on Canada~XD
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Old Scratch Goes to Whitechapel
(Anonymous) 2010-09-30 04:24 am (UTC)(link)I hope you lovely anon's can forgive me da?
England was worried. Alfred could tell. Not long after he had arrived, there had been a murder in Whitechapel. Not surprising, but this was the third murder in just a few months. Alfred smiled darkly. Emma had been first. He had watched her murderers, knowing she would be unable to identify him as anything but a teen. America officially left a few days later.
A young American rented a flat in London Proper.
Martha was next, 39 holes in her young body. Very Julius Caesar, but something was missing. He sighed and moved on, leaving her behind and cleaning himself. He sat in his rented flat, toying with the knife tip. He wanted something… beautiful. But Nothing flashy like a stupid cultist. Those fools made him want to wring their misguided necks and toss them to the Devil’s true body to be torn asunder.
Mary was a name he truly detested. He found his calling as he silenced her with two slashes. Her neck opened in a lovely red grin as he ripped open her lower stomach and sliced the rest. He still felt something was missing though. But what could it be? He had found the most beautiful way to slice them. He frowned thoughtfully as he decided to try again.
Annie was a pretty girl he decided as he ground darker color into his hair and put on his oldest suit. He silenced her with two cuts as well. He tore into her abdomen and stole what he wanted. That eased the feelings, but still… He wanted this to be perfect.
Elizabeth was an accident. He hadn’t intended to kill her, he couldn’t place why she was unsuitable, but had been able to silence her easily once she caught on to his true nature. He found a better one just a little later.
Miss Catherine was perfect. He cut her open and took the original as well as a kidney and part of the apron she wore. This should work. But it was later that he realized he wasn’t sated. He dropped the apron near some graffiti and continued on.
He growled and took his knife. He had to get this right.
Mary again. He slinked into her room, catlike. He was angry as he tore into her. He destroyed her face and removed her organs. He didn’t want any. Except… Her heart was beautiful. He lifted it, turning it side to side. Yes… This was what he wanted. What he needed. His craving for blood and death.
Usually he worked through people. Giving them tools and letting them fall to their dooms. But there was nothing, nothing like taking a life with his own two hands. He smirked as he went home, glass jars filled with formaldehyde. One with a kidney and two with a uterus. And one bearing a perfect perfect heart.
“You know…” Piotr comented softly, turning purple-blue eyes to Alfred. Alfred smiled back at the Alaskan representative, “I always wondered where you got these. They are so well-preserved.”
“I picked it up in Whitechapel,” Alfred replied, smiling.
Re: Old Scratch Goes to Whitechapel
(Anonymous) 2010-09-30 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)AA and OS here
(Anonymous) 2010-09-30 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)Alfred doing something so violent...
But we had to get away from the mushy stuff before we became too nice~
I'm not a nice guy~
I'm the devil for Hell's sake!
And you're a deliciously evil one~XD
Damn straight!
Different anon
(Anonymous) 2010-10-01 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)(Though I'd like to point out that OS went to England to kill people. Face it, man, you have a soft spot for Americans XD )
ZOMG, I spy an Alaska! *_*
You rock, AA!
You too, OS! ;D
Re: Different anon
(Anonymous) 2010-10-02 02:02 am (UTC)(link)... I didn't even notice OTZ
Yes you do~XD
And we thank you~
Above anon
(Anonymous) 2010-10-01 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)(reCaptcha: mensung one ... apparently rC is wondering when you're going to Georgia. -_-u )
Re: Above anon
(Anonymous) 2010-10-02 02:08 am (UTC)(link)Be sure to purchase your ticket at the nearest awesome fill/request of awesome proportions~
Such as Shota!fills or some hard-core stuff like that FCGB~
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Don't encourage him...
orz
And we aren't sure~
The next chapter is being plotted~
But miss Sloth here got herself kicked off the computer again...
I'm so proud of her for breaking one of the Commandments~<3
... Captcha says: 1837, suingal
Creepy~XD
Re: Old Scratch Goes to Whitechapel
(Anonymous) 2010-10-01 04:32 am (UTC)(link)I do hope we get to see Russia, not just because I like AmeiRuss (I do~) but also because Russia in canon is a demon/works for the devil/is evil enough to be summoned by Engalnd when he wanted a monster instead.
And England seems to dabble in both dark and light magic...but since he has so many cute magic friends its my headcanon he dabbles usually in light one more. So I cant wait to see what happens (and the states reactions) and who REAL America is. I still think his possessed...due to an old indian curse. Which reminds me are you gonna use the whole Indian curse on the presidents? http://www.snopes.com/history/american/curse.asp
Actually the first thing you wote...it seems like your getting to that in the story. Like if you pulled that out of the story and now are getting to the point where England knows about it and I just cant wait to read it!
Why is OP so late these times?
(Anonymous) 2010-10-05 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)I am so so so so so sorry for the late review.
The third victim named Mary, does that have anything to do with Mary the mother of jesus or am I far off?
And Alfred! What happened? You were so nice in the last two and now...this!? I'm not complaining, but Alfred.
This one...like the other ones are now giving me chills. Nice.
And personification of Alaska! Yay!You got it OP!
(Anonymous) 2010-10-06 12:03 am (UTC)(link)Yes...
He really hates the name Mary because of her...
It's Cause He's evil? XD
You wanted me to be more Evil...
Make up your mind woman! D<
Yay for chills!
Yep! That's Alaska!BTW...
Where do you want him to strike next OP?
I have some requests already... OTL
But I have no idea how to complete them yet... orz
Re: You got it OP!HI!
(Anonymous) 2010-10-06 12:58 am (UTC)(link)I am not the OP but...I hardly ever see IL in here. Im not bitching about my state never being here Im just saying...perhaps Illinois could be a place he strikes? We have that whole Resurrection Mary and were popular for the mob at one point (not good I know but still...) and Im sure youd be able to find a bunch more that are ten times more original then mary!
Friend: Perhaps a mental asylum or him driving someone crazy? those past mental asylums were awful and patients sicknesses were often blamed on positions/the devil...it be pretty cool to see Al's reaction to this!
Friend 2: Im interested in seeing who the /real/ America is the the continuation of that first scene *crosses fingers and hopes Arthur finds real America after discovering this is the actual devil who apparently pretended to be a kid/break away?* o.o?y/n?
Re: You got it OP!HI!
(Anonymous) 2010-10-06 12:59 am (UTC)(link)Hi there reader!non~
(Anonymous) 2010-10-06 01:42 am (UTC)(link)I'll have to hunt that one down...
...
Mental houses eh?
*gears turning*
...
I'll see what I can do~
Re: Hi there reader!non~
(Anonymous) 2010-10-06 02:20 am (UTC)(link)I LOVE her asylum idea! May I added haunted houses?
http://www.hauntedhamilton.com/gotw_hullhouse.html
http://books.google.com/books?id=gE4P1bhDCB4C&pg=PA27&lpg=PA27&dq=illinois+devil+related+stories&source=bl&ots=C1FdV7glMP&sig=J5U585wLcCLZDnVhu1pFwvxZed8&hl=en&ei=fNqrTKSoIMG9nAfX8YDiDA&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=5&ved=0CCMQ6AEwBA#v=onepage&q&f=false
^^ seems a bit long and all but it says something on the devil and IL right away!
I found this especially great apparently the devil has /chairs/ everywhere:
Peck Cemetery, near Cerro Gordo, Illinois, has a Devil's Chair of its own. This one was supposedly erected by satanists, to give the devil a place to sit and observe their antics after they'd summoned him. Peck Cemetery, near Cerro Gordo, Illinois, has a Devil's Chair of its own. This one was supposedly erected by satanists, to give the devil a place to sit and observe their antics after they'd summoned him. (Reports are mum on whether or not he enjoyed a cold beer during the show.) There are a string of legends surrounding it, including that anyone who has dared to sit in the chair has died within a year thereafter. Supposedly, it's always several degrees colder in the cemetery, and people who have ventured there at night have been driven away by robe-wearing figures. BUSBYS CHAIR OMG is that how England found out??? Website/other chairs found here: http://firefox.org/news/articles/777/1/The-Devil039s-Stuff/Page1.html I cant get the image of England finding out that his chair is the devils and that the devil is al...and that leads to a confrintation...annnnd >.<; YOUR STORIES TO GOOD
So thats it. Umm please do feel free to add anything! Its just I felt a bit guilty asking but not giving >.<;
Old Scratch Omake
(Anonymous) 2010-10-06 03:22 am (UTC)(link)"RUSSIA!" He yelled, bursting into the room, "WHAT WERE YOU DOING SITTING ON MY CHAIR?!"
"Oh, Hello Comrade~" Russia smiled innocently, "I just thought your chair was looking more comfortable than usual. So I decided to try it out."
"Oh~" Alfred nodded, smiling at him cheerfully, "Next time wait for me to get here first and ask me Okay?"
Re: Old Scratch Omake
(Anonymous) 2010-10-12 07:47 am (UTC)(link)wait more comf- omg was something sacrificed ;A;
Re: Old Scratch Omake
(Anonymous) 2010-10-12 02:36 pm (UTC)(link)He is~
But it eventually comes back~
I'm glad you like them.
And yes he does~XD
Like recognises like~
No... but the description states that Busby died in the chair and his soul kinda lingers around... so...
it's kind of like when Russia sits on Canada~XD
OP
(Anonymous) 2010-10-06 03:49 am (UTC)(link)And yeah I wanted you to be more evil. But I also like seeing your other side occassionaly. And don't deny that you have one, we know you do.
Where? I really have no idea. For some reason the concentration camps came into mind at the moment during WWII.
But if you have, and can fill, those other requests then I have no problem waiting.
Re: OP
(Anonymous) 2010-10-06 04:03 am (UTC)(link)Halos and harps... *SULK!*
I might do that...
I shall do my best OP!
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Captcha say: praccula and
it wants me to deal with Romania?