..... OP is beyond words. T-this is honestly a scenario I've wanted to read about since I started shipping USUK 2 years ago. OP didn't think anyone would fill, but SWEET MERCY Author!Anon this was tremendously satisfying on every level, from the mood, to the emotions, and the acts and situation itself - just... guh.. I... !!!
Your writing prose is flawless and fluid and the characterizations are SPOT ON. Your dialogue? Refreshing, intelligent, and just *perfect* anon. And that didn't take away from the kink side either, in fact it just enhanced it. OP cannot worship this enough, anon, and promises if Author!Anon ever deanons a shower of gifts will ensue!! Ahh god. Just... like the other anon above said, I can't help but crave some sort of closure of their feelings but isn't that how USUK is in the first place, though that's just because of how great your writing is!!! Anon saves this story to harddrive with the utmost reverence, author!anon! Thank you, thank you!!
Re: Survival (5/5)
(Anonymous) 2010-09-29 05:10 am (UTC)(link)Your writing prose is flawless and fluid and the characterizations are SPOT ON. Your dialogue? Refreshing, intelligent, and just *perfect* anon. And that didn't take away from the kink side either, in fact it just enhanced it. OP cannot worship this enough, anon, and promises if Author!Anon ever deanons a shower of gifts will ensue!! Ahh god. Just... like the other anon above said, I can't help but crave some sort of closure of their feelings
but isn't that how USUK is in the first place, though that's just because of how great your writing is!!! Anon saves this story to harddrive with the utmost reverence, author!anon! Thank you, thank you!!