Did you read my answer to authoranon's one? I am very much interested in this too. And I also ask authoranon to continue, for my sake and for your sake, all the reviewers that loved this. I wasn't implying this was badly-written or that I wanted it off the thread; I was just offering concrit. Apparently that is bad, and I shall try to refrain from offering it in the future and just write encouragement, since it alarms everyone so much!
But yes, again, authoranon, please continue this, since I'm also very intrigued to see it develop ^^
sorry OP, critique is fine, but it's more appropriate to critique the story on it's own merit and leave out the a longwinded pointing out of what was different from your prompt.
I gave praise to the story on it's own merit but criticised what I personally found less gripping. But I'll take note on this; since I didn't notice what I was doing, in danger of committing the same thing again, I will refrain to give critique, because I don't want to cause so much trouble ever again, I don't want to come off as annoying/ungrateful/rude and get yelled at, and I don't want OP to feel bad and stop writing.
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OP
(Anonymous) 2010-09-24 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)I wasn't implying this was badly-written or that I wanted it off the thread; I was just offering concrit. Apparently that is bad, and I shall try to refrain from offering it in the future and just write encouragement, since it alarms everyone so much!
But yes, again, authoranon, please continue this, since I'm also very intrigued to see it develop ^^
Re: OP
(Anonymous) 2010-09-24 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)Re: OP
(Anonymous) 2010-09-24 06:56 pm (UTC)(link)