While I agree with first!anon about France's characterization becoming more intricate, I think what struck me the most was this:
“No,” answered France, without a hint of humor or exasperation.
Because by that point I was becoming tired of Alfred's need to have everything repeated to him three or four times, and you took that and spun it on its head. Very well done.
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Re: Sexual Gratification [5/?]
(Anonymous) 2010-09-19 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)“No,” answered France, without a hint of humor or exasperation.
Because by that point I was becoming tired of Alfred's need to have everything repeated to him three or four times, and you took that and spun it on its head. Very well done.