Yanking off his gloves, this time Alfred touched Arthur with his bare hands.
Arthur chocked when he was turned on his stomach. The hands prodded at his skin, leaving behind angry purple-green bruises, sores that would last for days. Arthur’s breath hitched when lean fingers ran up the length of his body, spiking higher and higher, dangerously close to the clasp that held his robe together…
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…eh. I am much too embarrassed to post the rest of this chapter. Cough. I’ve never written this kink before, hell, never even considered it, so please allow me some time to mentally prepare myself. I will post the rest later tonight, dear anons. Also, thanks so much for your comments; I’m wary about replying to them as I do not wish to take up valuable space. But please know that I appreciate every single one of them! :D
This story makes me feel like I'm watching a car crash in a strange beautiful way. My heart bleeds for Arthur and I think I spent most of this section just really wanting him to go off with Francis if only to spare him. I've got my fingers crossed for a happy ending.
When I saw that this had updated, I got this cold feeling in my gut. Though maybe that was just the water I was drinking.
Either way! This story is disturbing in the best way possible. Even though I have a feeling it's only going to get worse before it gets please anon? better. I'm pretty resiliant when it comes to dark and angsty stuff, but this...I'm not sure that I'll be able to finish this one. D:
Oh my god, I love this story more than words. I love all of the build up at the beginning, the way Arthur truly loves Alfred, oh god, it's just going to get even more painful. I am so glad like you don't even know that you're filling this, anon. And don't worry, I'm sure you'll do a wonderful job writing the kink! :D
Byah. Loving this fill to bits, definitely one of the best I've seen in these past few months. Has me clapping with glee and squealing in my head every time I see an update posted. Everything about it is just plain superb, from the emotion to the prose. Absolutely gorgeous, cannot wait for more. ♥
Eep, a week since the update! Horrible OP is horrible, I apologize, rl things made it impossible to check on kinkmeme for a loooong while. D;
THIS...THIS... Oh my god, you have no idea how much I'm in love with your writing. qwrjiikhbkjj I know I sound repetitive, but in all seriousness, I don't even know how you do it authoranon, turning the prompt into something this horribly disturbing and absolutely beautiful all at once. Alfred's scientific observations are just perfect, chillingly cruel without meaning to be, and Francis Francis, I strangely feel so sorry for him in this story. ;_; Gah, you deserve all the hugs and kisses and love you can get for your amazingness. Love you lots, authornon, even if I don't get to say so promptly and never stop writing ♥
Ah, I completely understand the bit about mental preparation. It took me quite a while to get used to a lot of kinks that snoop around here too, orz. Anonymity made it easy in the end pfff
Wow didn't expect the fill to turn out like this, and I'm assuming Arthur could be human sized if he tried. My mind is very much in the gutter with these thoughts. Please continue with this, it's amazing.
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Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
(Anonymous) 2010-09-05 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)Arthur chocked when he was turned on his stomach. The hands prodded at his skin, leaving behind angry purple-green bruises, sores that would last for days. Arthur’s breath hitched when lean fingers ran up the length of his body, spiking higher and higher, dangerously close to the clasp that held his robe together…
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…eh. I am much too embarrassed to post the rest of this chapter. Cough. I’ve never written this kink before, hell, never even considered it, so please allow me some time to mentally prepare myself. I will post the rest later tonight, dear anons. Also, thanks so much for your comments; I’m wary about replying to them as I do not wish to take up valuable space. But please know that I appreciate every single one of them! :D
Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
(Anonymous) 2010-09-05 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
(Anonymous) 2010-09-05 10:51 pm (UTC)(link)Though maybe that was just the water I was drinking.
Either way! This story is disturbing in the best way possible. Even though I have a feeling it's only going to get worse before it gets please anon? better. I'm pretty resiliant when it comes to dark and angsty stuff, but this...I'm not sure that I'll be able to finish this one. D:
Even so, keep up the good work, anon. d;_;b
Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
(Anonymous) 2010-09-05 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)I eagerly await more.
Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
(Anonymous) 2010-09-06 04:09 am (UTC)(link)Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
(Anonymous) 2010-09-06 07:03 am (UTC)(link)Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
(Anonymous) 2010-09-13 02:48 am (UTC)(link)THIS...THIS... Oh my god, you have no idea how much I'm in love with your writing. qwrjiikhbkjj I know I sound repetitive, but in all seriousness, I don't even know how you do it authoranon, turning the prompt into something this horribly disturbing and absolutely beautiful all at once. Alfred's scientific observations are just perfect, chillingly cruel without meaning to be, and Francis Francis, I strangely feel so sorry for him in this story. ;_; Gah, you deserve all the hugs and kisses and love you can get for your amazingness. Love you lots, authornon, even if I don't get to say so promptly and never stop writing ♥
Ah, I completely understand the bit about mental preparation. It took me quite a while to get used to a lot of kinks that snoop around here too, orz. Anonymity made it easy in the end pfff
Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
(Anonymous) 2010-10-26 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)Please continue with this, it's amazing.