I love the sleeping explanation for so many reasons! All the reactions are amazing - and of course France and the shopping is the perfect mix of his fatherly helpfulness and his intensity.
This is just full of so many good things!
As for the ending, I don't know if I could say, because I could easily see the story going either way. (I would like to see the "what if this isn't permanent?" talk at some point (again, up to anon)) The ending is up to you (Anon) - clever surprises are also, always welcome!
I can't wait for more I'm super excited! Can't wait for Netherlands, Thanks again!
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(Anonymous) 2010-08-31 06:28 am (UTC)(link)I love the sleeping explanation for so many reasons!
All the reactions are amazing - and of course France and the shopping is the perfect mix of his fatherly helpfulness and his intensity.
This is just full of so many good things!
As for the ending, I don't know if I could say, because I could easily see the story going either way. (I would like to see the "what if this isn't permanent?" talk at some point (again, up to anon)) The ending is up to you (Anon) - clever surprises are also, always welcome!
I can't wait for more I'm super excited! Can't wait for Netherlands, Thanks again!