This was very beautiful and touching, Francis is the best person on the entire earth. I have the feeling he suspects Alfred's true age, or at least that it's several numbers lower than he says. Oh god, such a kind person, when he comes to know the kind of life Al's been forced to live...;_; Also, good job on the puking thing! Because seriously, there's enough of Perfectly Perfect Sex around here, I'm very glad to see a more realistic take on drunk sex, especially from someone so young and in this context.
And god, Kiku is gonna throw a fit, and sadly, with good reason. What's gonna happen now? I can't wait for the next morning, when he truly sees Francis and his home for the first time (I have to commend you on your descriptions about a club and the people there at night, as well as the ones perceived by an intoxicated mind. There's a general sense of someone from Francis part, but not clearly defined, the same way you don't truly SEE people in the night life).
I have the sinking feeling that it's no coincidence Francis knows that song. And his desperate tone to keep Al close makes me wary. Does he know Matt? Maybe Al's similar looks attracted him? Is Matt still alive? oh God Glad to know Arthur will be showing up! I'm a great admirer of his. Hopefully "that" will happen soon. You little teaseXD
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Re: Angels 21
(Anonymous) 2010-08-28 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)Also, good job on the puking thing! Because seriously, there's enough of Perfectly Perfect Sex around here, I'm very glad to see a more realistic take on drunk sex, especially from someone so young and in this context.
And god, Kiku is gonna throw a fit, and sadly, with good reason. What's gonna happen now? I can't wait for the next morning, when he truly sees Francis and his home for the first time (I have to commend you on your descriptions about a club and the people there at night, as well as the ones perceived by an intoxicated mind. There's a general sense of someone from Francis part, but not clearly defined, the same way you don't truly SEE people in the night life).
I have the sinking feeling that it's no coincidence Francis knows that song. And his desperate tone to keep Al close makes me wary. Does he know Matt? Maybe Al's similar looks attracted him? Is Matt still alive? oh God
Glad to know Arthur will be showing up! I'm a great admirer of his. Hopefully "that" will happen soon. You little teaseXD
Re: Angels 21
(Anonymous) 2010-08-28 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)