Hetalia kink meme ([personal profile] hetalia_kink) wrote2011-02-27 12:31 pm

Past-Part Fills Part 7






Past-Part Fills Part Seven

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Re: I Think I Need A New Heart [24d/?]

(Anonymous) 2012-03-15 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
This was a little sad and painful to read - but you wrote it all so nicely! Well done. I really like the tack you are taking with this. It adds depth and dramatic tension. Alfred has moved on, and I imagine this will drive Francis CRAZY. Has this even happened to him before- being the rejected one? I also imagine the reason he didn't want to sleep with Alfred was because he did have feelings for him, even if they were so deep down they were not in his surface mind, so he couldn't be business as usual. So. You have a great set up now- Arthur and Matt being lovey dovey, Alfred likely being cool and stand-offish - but likely getting loads of TLC from Matt and Arthur because they feel sorry for him-and Francis watching all of this while being kinda the odd man out. Heh heh. This is going to be awesome. Annnd,I imagine that Alfred has really moved on and if Francis decided he wants to be with Alfred, he will have his work cut out for him. Oh boy! Can't wait! Start writing noooooooooowwww! ;-)