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[Part 15] Spain/Romano - Withholding Sex, Seduction Part 7c/?

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
“And then, to my surprise, you couldn’t seem to find your own clothes when it came time for bed!” Feeling a little amused and charmed by his henchman’s antics now that they weren’t turning him on and challenging his resolve to abstain from sex, Spain pecked Romano on the cheek, making Romano smile for a brief moment before biting down on his lip in an attempt to hide it. “So of course you would choose a shirt of mine, though it’s beyond me why you didn’t choose pants, as well.”

“Easier access,” Romano explained, attempting a casual tone.

Spain smirked. “I’m sure it came in handy later on.” It took a moment for Romano to realize that Spain was making fun of him, and he smacked his thigh in irritation. Spain barely flinched and continued, “I just want you to know that I took full advantage of the length of that shirt as I walked you to the door. I had quite a lovely view of your pert little ass before you left, and even after you left, I kept seeing it over and over.” Spain snuck a hand down to pinch Romano’s ass, and Romano shrieked before covering his mouth in embarrassment. “Was there a reason you were drenched in my cologne?”

“Uh.” Romano shifted his gaze to the side, as if looking into Spain’s eyes would tell him the secret. “N-no. I just wanted to try—“

“Do you like that scent?”

“No!”

Such a hasty denial~. “No? Are you sure?” Romano wouldn’t look up, and Spain grinned. “Perhaps it was as helpful later on as the easy access. Does my scent turn you on, Romano?”

“I said no!” Romano snapped. “I did that on a whim!” Seeing Spain’s unconvinced look, Romano insisted, “I did! It doesn’t fucking ‘turn me on’ to have you wear my favorite—“ Romano cut himself short and cringed as he realized he gave himself away, and Spain grinned in victory as he found a new weakness of Romano’s that he intended to exploit quite often now, no matter how expensive it became. “Shut up! Move on!” Romano demanded.

Burying his nose into Romano’s neck despite the loud protests, Spain inhaled deeply. “You smell nice, too,” he murmured. “Like fresh air and sweet things. But that’s because I haven’t covered you in the smell of sex yet.”

Romano’s pulse raced, even as he shied away from Spain’s tickling breaths. “Move on,” he insisted again. Why did Spain always have to discover Romano’s secrets at one point or another? He could never keep any sort of advantage in their relationship. Oh wait, but his next attempt was… “Uh, but you can skip the next one.”

“Skip it? Not the phone sex?” Spain’s eyes sparkled as he remembered, and Romano covered his face in shame. “I think that may have been my favorite attempt.”

“Shut up, stupid, it was awful.”

Spain shook his head, wondering if he and Romano had heard the same words stuttered so nervously, yet so passionately into the phone. “Let me tell you something about that little phone call of yours,” Spain purred. He pulled Romano’s hands away so he could look straight into that embarrassed face, which was really embarrassed for no reason. “I was at a meeting with my boss. My boss was in the room with me, sitting right across from me. And do you know what happened after you started talking?”

“He heard?!” Romano cried in horror.

“Oh no,” Spain said through gritted teeth. “If he had, then I would at least be spared the painful explanation of why I was suddenly hard.”

Romano’s mouth dropped open. “You pitched a tent in front of your b-boss?” he asked, his voice shaking a little on the last few words, as if just barely containing his gleeful laughter.

“Well you don’t have to sound so happy about it!” Spain cried. He gripped Romano underneath his arms and yanked him upwards so that they were both facing each other on their knees. He pressed their foreheads together and pouted. “It was really embarrassing.”

“But it was so lame.”

[Part 15] Spain/Romano - Withholding Sex, Seduction Part 7d/?

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
Spain shook his head a bit before pressing his lips to Romano’s again. “Not at all,” he murmured. “Fucking hot. I love it when you take initiative. Hearing you talking so sexually was exciting in a way you can’t even begin to understand. I wanted to slam my head against my boss’s desk because I couldn’t be alone when you called.” Spain molded his hips to Romano’s, and Romano’s breath hitched as he felt their cocks press together. They were both getting hard, and Spain rolled against Romano as he continued, “I wanted you to keep going. I wanted to make you say everything you would do to me, in detail. Hearing your cute little voice say such naughty, filthy things…”

“I say bad things all the time,” Romano protested, pulling Spain closer to get more friction between them. He couldn’t help but speed up his thrusts a bit and moan quietly as the pleasure and heat built.

“Not like that,” Spain replied. “What was it you said? ‘I’ll get on top of you. I’ll touch places all over.’” Romano decided to occupy his mouth with sucking on Spain’s neck rather than affirming the embarrassing words. Spain tilted his head away in a silent invitation for more, and murmured, “We’ll be doing that again, you know. The next time you’re away in Italy and I’m here, all alone and craving my Romano.” Romano sucked harder and continued to grind against Spain. “I’ll call you and ask what you’re wearing, and then we’ll make the conversation very pleasant. I’ll lay on my bed and strip away my clothes, and I’ll listen to you tell me what to do and pretend you’re beside me. And you’ll be in the basement, speaking as quietly as you can for fear that Veneziano and Germany will wander downstairs and catch you in the act of jerking off to my voice.”

Romano groaned against Spain’s skin before fumbling for the button to his pants. His wrists were captured though, by a jerk that apparently wasn’t finished speaking.

“I thought you wanted to hear how you affected me?”

“No, you can tell me the rest later,” Romano said, struggling against Spain’s grip.

Spain smirked. “I don’t think so. We have three more attempts to discuss, don’t we? Why don’t you remind me what the next one was?”

Romano glared, but knew there was no point in fighting Spain. He’d lose. He always lost, damn it. “Maid,” he muttered.

“Ah yes, that’s right.” Romano rolled his eyes then froze as Spain caressed his cheek. “My darling little maid in his darling little outfit. You should wear skirts more often.” A hand dropped down to grope Romano’s ass, and Romano squirmed in Spain’s grip. Talented fingers squeezed and kneaded, crawling towards the middle of Romano’s ass where they pressed the fabric of his pants just slightly into the indent.

The teasing action caused Romano to suck a hasty breath in through his teeth, and he pressed backwards into Spain’s grip, aching for more of a touch.

“I was so turned on,” Spain said, squeezing Romano’s ass hard. “I didn’t even know what to do. I wanted to bend you over my desk and throw that skirt up and fuck you, and every time I thought I had regained control, you made me lose it again. Bending over so I could see those ridiculously skimpy panties hugging your ass and crotch, playing with that feather duster, calling me Boss; you’re going to regret doing those things because now that you’ve done them once, I’m going to make you do them again and again.”

It wasn’t fair that Spain could take Romano’s seduction attempts and use them against him! Every word that fell from his lips was like a fiery lick of arousal to Romano’s body, and the only way he could keep from throwing himself against Spain and begging him to fuck him, please, was to put his stubbornness to work. “You should have taken advantage of it when you had the chance,” Romano informed him with a shaky smirk. “I won’t do it again.”

[Part 15] Spain/Romano - Withholding Sex, Seduction Part 7e/?

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
His refusal was met with a laugh. “Oh yes, you will,” Spain purred into his ear, digging his fingers into Romano’s crack. Romano scraped his nails against Spain’s arms as he shoved backwards to get those fingers to penetrate further. They were hindered, of course, by his clothes, but fucking hell, he wanted Spain inside there already. “Call me Boss,” Spain instructed, kneading his handful while rubbing his erection against Romano’s.

“Fuck no,” Romano hissed.

“Romano, be a good little maid, or there will be consequences.”

That shouldn’t have sounded so enticing. “No,” Romano repeated, daring Spain to punish him for his insolence. Spain shot him a wicked grin, accepting the challenge. Then suddenly Romano was flipped over so that his chest was pressed hard into the mattress, and Spain gripped his pants and tore them away, baring his lower body to his hungry gaze. “What are you doing?!” Romano cried as Spain shoved his thighs underneath him, thrusting his naked ass into the air. He couldn’t be planning to—“Spain, wait!”

Thwack. Romano cried out as Spain’s hand came down hard on his ass, and he tried not to sound too much like he was moaning in pleasure. Spain didn’t often spank him, and—“Ow! Ow!” Again! Romano groaned and fought against Spain’s hold as he continued to smack his ass, the sounds reverberating throughout the room, but not hurting nearly as bad as they sounded. In fact, Romano’s heart hammered in his chest as his whole body flushed with pleasure.

“Just say it, Romano,” Spain said, slapping the bare flesh in front of him and watching it jiggle and redden.

“No!” Romano’s toes curled as his cock hardened further, loving Spain’s aggression, his dominance. “You can’t fucking make me—“

Thwack. Romano gritted his teeth and writhed desperately, wishing he could get some friction against his throbbing cock. Spain’s own cock pressed insistently against the front of his pants, jerking with every smack against Romano’s bottom that sent heat coursing through Spain’s blood. He would stop before hurting Romano too much, but if he could just get Romano to say that one word… Spain laid one final, sharp slap against the flushed cheeks of Romano’s ass, and Romano shrieked.

“Ok, ok! Boss, stop! Please, Boss! A-aahh!” Spain loosened his grip immediately and let one palm rest against Romano’s heated skin, rubbing gentle circles to soothe the hurt. He had to take in several deep breaths to calm the rapid beating of his heart and chase away the desire to fuck Romano just like this. He let his fingers glide over the bare skin of Romano’s ass, tempting himself but not daring to do anything further.

“Good,” Spain rasped. He cleared his throat a bit before saying, “Y-you should probably not be in this position much longer.”

Romano pulled himself up with trembling arms and spread his legs a bit, forcing Spain to close his eyes and palm his cock through his pants. It was so hot and hard, and wanted attention so badly. If he didn’t feel obligated to share with Romano the hell he had been put through, he would bury his cock in Romano’s ass right then and there. Spain was struck with a rather irrational irritation with the little tease in front of him.

“I just want you to know,” Spain said, unzipping his pants for a bit of relief. “I took full advantage of you after you fell unconscious. I groped you when I changed your clothes and then jerked off while you were still naked.”

“Fucking pervert!” Romano shouted, spinning around to glare at Spain and having his attention drawn in an instant to his opened fly. “I knew you did something like that,” he muttered. He stared at Spain’s erection with darkened eyes, and Spain knew what he wanted. He gripped the bulge in his boxers and drank in the deep flush spread across Romano’s cheeks and neck. The other watched in rapt attention as Spain massaged his cock, and then just the tip of his tongue slipped out to wet his dry lips.

[Part 15] Spain/Romano - Withholding Sex, Seduction Part 7f/?

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
“Does kitten want a taste?” Spain taunted.

Romano scoffed at the question, but didn’t turn away. If anything, he parted his lips even more in want. The sting of Spain’s hand on his ass was already fading.

“What made you choose a cat next, Romano?” Spain inquired. He slid his fingers beneath the waistband of his boxers and dragged them downwards with unnerving slowness. “Not that I’m complaining. Those ears and tail suited you quite well.”

“You think everything suits me well,” Romano replied in annoyance. He moved his hand over his cock with long, slow strokes as he watched Spain’s skin slowly reveal itself inch by inch. His mouth watered as he focused on the large bulge that shifted with the movement of Spain’s waistband, pulled down and close to his body until the elastic restrained it no longer, and it sprung upwards again, beckoning for Romano to lick it. He swallowed and squeezed his cock hard.

“True,” Spain admitted. “But I think you cheated with the cat outfit. See, my opinion was swayed a bit in its favor as the kitten wearing it was also in heat and humping my lap.”

Romano scowled and flushed deeply at the accusation. “I wasn’t in fucking heat, Spain.”

“Could have fooled me.” Spain grinned and pulled his boxers the rest of the way off, flinging them at Romano, who ducked with a growl. “You looked desperate. I thought you were two seconds away from rolling around on the floor and yowling.”

“You’re an asshole,” Romano replied, with little feeling behind it. He licked his lips as he took in Spain’s naked body in its entirety, and suddenly felt a little playful. It was something he’d regret upon waking the next morning, and another thing he’d have to make Spain add to his “List of Things Concerning Romano That Are Never to Be Spoken of Again.”. But seeing as the majority of Romano’s seduction attempts were now on that list, and he was finally getting sex, Romano decided to stop giving a shit and make Spain smile—er, fuck him. “You want a kitten?” Romano asked, falling to his hands and knees on top of the mattress.

Spain’s lips parted wordlessly in surprise, but then stretched into a smile as Romano crawled towards him, never breaking eye contact and smirking just slightly. “Are you offering?” Spain encouraged.

“Something like that.” Romano licked the inside of Spain’s thigh, and heard a soft gasp from above. It was a brilliant little noise, and Romano pressed his tongue more firmly against Spain’s skin, dragging it upwards and stopping just short of very critical areas in an attempt to hear it again.

“Could I get you to…” Spain cleared his throat softly, the only indication that he was a little embarrassed to ask, and then continued, “Meow… a bit?” Romano grinned against Spain’s thigh and lifted himself to his knees, caressing his fingers lightly up the back of Spain’s legs.

He pressed a kiss above Spain’s heart, and something like a mix between a purr and a mew rumbled out of his chest before he could help it. Spain ran a reverent hand through his hair and let it fall behind his ear to scratch gently, and it actually felt rather good. He could understand why cats enjoyed such petting. Romano’s hands moved upwards just a bit more to squeeze Spain’s ass, and he looked up at the other with sparkling eyes, going, “Merow.”

“God, Romano,” Spain muttered. He leaned down and kissed Romano’s forehead, but that wasn’t fucking enough. Romano grabbed his neck and dragged him into a much sexier kiss with lips and tongue.

Their bodies pressed against one another, hard and flushed. Every once in awhile Romano would tear himself from Spain’s lips to lick at his neck or ear and give a tiny meow. Spain responded very enthusiastically, which was amusing as hell and also strangely satisfying. But Romano was craving more. “I do want a taste,” he admitted into Spain’s cheek. He turned them so he could push Spain down into a lying position.


Part 6 Thank Yous

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
Anon1: Thank you!!! I felt like Spain deserved some sort of apology, so I’m glad you were happy with that ^_^ It felt a little like cheating to make Spain snap with that, but hopefully not many people mind!

Anon2: XD I don’t know, but I’m happy you did!!! Thank you so much~! To hear that it made you smile made me really, really happy ^_^ (and “hot Spaniard sex” – it’s the best kind!). Hopefully the ending will be satisfying, even though I have to break it up into two parts >_<;

Anon3: It’s fine!!! XD Thank you for leaving another lovely comment! Things between Spain and Romano are definitely getting resolved ;) And I *love* cute brotherly moments between Romano and Veneziano >w< They’re so adorable, I can’t resist.

(And I knew it was a bit rushed. *shakes fist at self* Thank you for telling me! I’ll read over it a final time and consider editing before deanoning with it)

Anon4: *hugs* Yes indeed! Welcome to the confusion of my strange and disorganized numbering system! And thank you! <3 I had to include pirates XD And I’m so glad you liked North Italy~! The Italy brothers are amazing :3

Anon5: Aaww, that’s alright ^_^; Thank you so much for reading and commenting now!!! Pft, communication? Those two don’t need such silly things as communication :D “Confession Italy” XD I hadn’t intended for Spain to plan that, but after I wrote it, I knew it would sort of come off that way!!!

OP: ;_; R-really? I didn’t think I had too much feeling behind that, so it’s kind of amazing to hear that it affected you ^_^;; I’m really glad you like the characterization, too!!! I always worry that I don’t do well with that~. I hope you like the rest of the story. Thank you so much!!! ♥

Anon7: *hugs new anon* XD I love how you worded that!!! Because that really is Romano in this story, isn’t it? Clever, yet clueless ^_^;; And another Veneziano-lover, yay! Thank you!!! Hope you like the rest~.

*Under Part 6e*

Anon8: *smacks face* I’m sorry!!! If you really do check daily, then it must be irritating that I’m so slow >_<;; But thank you!!! It’s so awesome that you have a certain connection with Romano and Spain in this, even though it might not be in the best of situations ^_^;; But Romano and Spain are adorable, so I bet you two are, as well!!!

Anon9: I feel like I must apologize to you for the slowness, as well then XD Oh well. Thank you!!! I hope you enjoy the rest! <3





Anon 3 (also beware rambliness and keyboard mashing up ahead)

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
FFFFFFFFFF
I LOVE THIS
I LOVE EVERYTHING
EVERYTHING IS BEAUTIFUL, AND NOTHING HURTS
asdfghjkl;ad

This...this hit all the right places and all the right kinks and everything is great ahdksjdf; >////< Best update yet! ://D

I love how everything gets connected together in the end and hearing Spain's side of everything was great eeeeeeeeee!

AND OMG. THE SPANKING (I kept typing that as spainking >< ). I'm not OP but I LOVED THAT PART. Seeing Spain being all GRRR CALL ME BOSS and Romano being all NO NO NO (YES YES YES)

And near the end, where Romano takes control (sort of) and he's not totally submissive (although that's really hot) and he was being all MEOW (WHICH IS ALSO TOTALLY HOT. KITTY!ROMANO WILL ONE DAY BE THE END OF ME. which wouldn't be a bad way to go at all bfdsk)

And Romano giving Spain a BJ. *faints* I need must am slightly interested in seeing the continuation of that. OwO

Also, I hope Germany and Italy have left already. :X

TL;DR MARRY ME A!ANON. AND UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN, I NEED THIS LIKE AIR (flail)

Re: Part 6 Thank Yous

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
I... I don't remember if I'm the "another new anon" or not. FML

Holy crap this update was so hot! I was getting all tingly reading it, a!anon. Seriously, it was freakin' amazing. My heart was pounding the entire time.

Can we all move to Utah so I can marry you too?

(Same anon as above)

(Anonymous) 2011-08-04 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I just realized--Spain hasn't even said anything about Romano's pirate outfit! I hope that didn't get forgotten in the confusion and sexiness.

Anon1

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 07:50 am (UTC)(link)
There are stars in my eyes. Stars in my eyes. *_* OMG this buildup. Of course Spain has to dissect all of the attempts, lol, but this really is making me blush. I wonder if Veneziano and Germany are still downstairs. Giggles.

I don't even know what anon I am anymore. I'll just be the melted puddle in the corner in that case.

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG.

O.M.G.

I think I can safely say this is actually the hottest thing that I've read on the kink meme. You've managed to go and hit about a thousand of my personal kinks (I don't know about OP, but I'm down on my knees worshipping you for the spanking) and the possesive!sexy!Spain just HNNG.

After all of those attempts that made me want to superglue my face to a desk for poor Roma, and that wonderful little apology, this... this... just this. You managed to make it all so... not-cringey in retrospect! And I must say, I love how you've managed to avoid any angst at all - which with Romano, we all know, is like walking a fine line through a minefield.

As always, can't wait for the next part >3< ♥

I think I was Anon2 a lot of time ago? Oh well

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 09:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I

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THIS WAS SO GOOOOOD

I love that Spain isn't completely oblivious, I love how turned on he sounds, and most of all I love that Romano doesn't just lay there waiting to be ravished, but is instead as assertive and fun as he was in the other parts

and I loved that spanking. omg, the spanking. it was all I ever wanted

but most of all, I love you, anon!

Re: Part 6 Thank Yous

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm loving this fill, it's hot as hell and lovely <3
I can't wait to read the end *-*

Anon5[Who now renames herself as Communication!Anon since I'm not the 5th poster XD]

(Anonymous) 2011-08-02 07:54 am (UTC)(link)
FFFFFFF YES. This is beautiful XD

See Romano, your seduction did work! Spain's just too much of a boss!

But without communication, tsunderes will rule us all! D= Sure it's adorable and amusing at first but then it's all like SHUT UP AND ADMIT YOUR LOVE ALREADY!

Well. It works out that way, now doesn't it? Or maybe Veneziano is just so ninja that he used his pasta powers to make Romano confess 0.o

I wonder if Germany and Italy will leave now... They should... Unless you want the awkward lulz afterwards, which I have no issues with XD

Brandnewneverpostedbefore!Anon

(Anonymous) 2011-08-03 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
First time commenter, longtime stalker.

J--UG--ERR--GUH.

Now, I just want to let you know that I dang near had a heart attack this morning when I saw you updated. I've been checking just about everyday for the past two week and I thought "Hmm, I have ten minutes to burn before I go to work. Lemme see if she...." And then we come full circle to my heart attack.

MY FRANTIC INTERNAL BATTLE THIS MORNING: Stay and read this and be late for work...or go to work and not read this for 7 hours...decisions, decicions...


But now that I'm HERE, and have FINISHED IT, all I can say is YOU'RE KILLIN' ME HERE. And in all the right ways.

My kinks. My kinks. I don't know how long they can take this abuse. Do you live in my mind, Writer!Anon, because you've hit just about every single one of my kinks concerning Spain and Romano. Everything, every little seduction technique was adorable, sexy, and more than once or twice very embarassing. There is something to be said about Spain's resolve, because Romano was giving him hell and high water. You...you're just brilliant, Writer!anon. Words cannot describe how utterly BRILLIANT you are. And Romano's apology? Oh Roma, how can you be so sexy and so cute all at the same time? And your possessive!Spain is, is just...let's just say I can clearly see why Romano went to such lengths for sex. Cause that just can't be beat.

I need another update like...like...like how Spain needs Romano.

Re: [Part 15] Spain/Romano - Withholding Sex, Seduction Part 7f/?

(Anonymous) 2011-08-01 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. Fuck.

This whole story just... is wonderful.

And as for that update and dominant Romano- I'll be in my bunk good luck to the rest of you!