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Chapter 4 (cont.)

(Anonymous) 2010-01-27 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)

The next thing Germany knew there was a loud bam, and a man who looked strangely like America was standing in front of him. Though now that he thought about it, perhaps man was not the right word for it. This creature with America's face, had ram horns growing out of his head and large leathery white wings. Germany could now see a forked tail weaving back and forth behind the man and instead of feet he had hooves.

"A-America?" asked Germany, not quite believing what he was seeing.

The being chuckled darkly and a chill raced up Ludwig's spine.

"I am no country. Though, if you are looking for a name, people have been known to call me the Jersey Devil." he said with a cunning smirk.

"The Jersey Devil?" said Germany in disbelief.

"That's right." he said stepping slowly towards Ludwig and lowering himself before him on one knee.

"And..." the creature said, talking once more now that he and Germany were eye to eye, "I'm here to help you."

"Help me? How?" asked Ludwig, cautiously.

The thing, this... Jersey Devil, looked at Ludwig and his eyes flashed, startling the nation. Then the Jersey Devil's smirk returned, even bigger than before.

"Your brother, right?" he asked raising an eyebrow.

Germany stared up at the America look alike in shock.

"I can fix that you know, Germany." he said. He knew who this man was, and he knew he was desperate. Columbia would have had to be a fool to pass up on an opportunity like this. "I can make his illness just," and here the Jersey Devil paused to snap, "go away." he finished, standing up

Germany looked up at the man. Hate shown in his eyes. He knew not to trust people who called themselves devils so easily.

"And what do you want in return?" he asked.

"Oh, well that's easy. Just your soul."

"My soul?" asked Germany.

"Yes, you're soul. It's not even a bad deal for you. Most people have to be sentenced to hell when the die after making their deal, but you, you're a nation. You won't die for a long time, possibly never, so instead of waiting until you die, I just take your soul while you're alive. Bit by bit, day by day. You'll hardly even notice it's missing."

"Plus," the devil continued, "with all the stuff you've done, you probably would have gone to hell if you died anyway!" he finished, laughing loudly.

Germany glared at the man. He was despicable, and he knew one should not conspire with devils. Yet, it was his brother. He couldn't just let him die if he had the power to save him.

"I'll.. I'll do it." he said.

"Great!" said America, his smile turning vicious. Moving his right hand to the left he pulled a knife from midair and slashed his palm open. Then he took Germany's hand and did the same, after ripping off his glove. They shook, and the deal was made. As soon as their blood touched, Columbia felt power surge through him like he never had before. So this was the power of a nation's soul. It felt good. At the same time Germany felt a loss, like millions of lives being snuffed out. It hurt his side and he staggered away from the devil panting. Columbia just looked at him with a cold smirk, and as quickly as he had come, he vanished.

Germany sat, breathing deeply on the floor, sweat beading on his forehead. What the hell have I gotten myself into..

AUTHORS NOTE: So yeah. The we are finally going back to America and England after this.. probably. The next chapter should take longer, but I am addicted to writing this right now so.. Who knows. F5 often I guess. Comments and criticisms loved and appreciated.

Re: Chapter 4 (cont.)

(Anonymous) 2010-02-02 05:42 am (UTC)(link)
I can't critic for the life of mine so I'll just tell that your story is addicting! I can't wait where this story is going to

Re: Chapter 4 (cont.)

(Anonymous) 2010-02-14 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
*-* YES! This is...is...RAWR, THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE FAILS TO DESCRIBE THIS!!! ALJDLKFJLKSDJ;FDJSKLFJDSLFJDSKLJFLK!!!!!!!1 *fangirl spasm*
Please write more soon. And don't let the AWESOME PRUSSIA DIE!!! TTT____TTT