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Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-11-30 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
It is then that Alfred realizes that green thing that is so expertly escaping the monster’s clutches is England. The figure dodging the monster’s authority is undoubtedly England in all her glory; green miniskirt fluttering in the breeze, blond hair struggling to keep up with her swift movements, and the cursing that sounds like water flowing from her pursed lips, it’s all a part of an essential whole.

Alfred is stunned into silence. He watches, mesmerized at her every movement. It is then that the monster takes notice of him. Its eyes widened and the roots that were chasing after England’s lithe form not two seconds prior, are instantly changing directions, going straight towards him. In the face of such danger Alfred’s system panics and starts to shut down; the imminent attack is getting closer and closer and his body refused to move. He just stares in complete horror as danger gets closer and closer. But the offending articles never touch him, the roots stop right before they reach him, and he hears a large guttural grunt coming from the direction of the monster. And there is England, laying her fists savagely into the thing again and again.

It looks hopeful, like she is giving it a hell of beating, until the roots zero in on her. The blond seemed to notice this, and quickly springs away, but it isn’t fast enough. Roots wrap around her ankle and spin her around, as if she is nothing more than a ragdoll. England’s face scrunches in concentration as she struggles to escape, but it is to no avail. She isn’t making a sound, not cursing or screaming – and Alfred has to love her for that, cause he’d be bawling like a baby if it was him in a similar situation. The creature lets out a sickening laugh, jerks her around some more, and then tosses the young girl aside.

England sails through the air till she collides roughly with a street light with enough force to bring it crashing down around her. Time seemed to slow as she falls and crumples to the ground, coughing and sputtering. The blond tries to crawl back up but she is beaten to it by the roots, which violently continue to shove her from one place to another. She continues to try, a testament to something Alfred can’t quite place, but the roots are relentless and never let her up.

Alfred then realizes; this thing is going to kill her. His England is going to be murdered by some mutant plant thing, and he is sitting here watching it. Fire courses through his veins and Alfred moves to help her, but a small hand firmly grips his wrist. Tony looks up at him with something in his eye Alfred can’t distinguish, and shakes his head no.

“If you want to help her, follow me.” the alien says before pulling Alfred away from the wreckage. There is still sickening laughter flowing from the scene and the sound is only fuel to Alfred’s growing rage.

“But she needs help now!” Alfred growls. He tries to pull away, but Tony is much stronger then he looks and somehow keeps Alfred in his grip as he pulls them even farther away. “She’s going to die! I need to help her!” Alfred doesn’t care that his tone sounds desperate now, that it is rough but pleading at the same time.

“You can’t help her as you are! You’d only get yourself killed.”

“You said I was the hero, so let me save her!” Alfred rips his wrist away from the alien and turns to go.

“Say it!” The alien speaks with such finality that Alfred stops in his tracks turns to look at him in confusion.

“What?”

“‘America Star Power Make-Up’ If you want to help her, say it!”
Alfred looks at Tony in confusion before he allows the words to slip softly from his lips.

“America Star Power Make-Up.”

The world explodes into color.

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-11-30 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmmmm making it post-apocalyptic is an interesting twist. I like England's power to make it rain >.< and Tony as Luna is all kinds of win.

I can't wait to see if America genderbends as well (and if he figures out that this might make England a guy as well) so update soon please?

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-12-01 03:01 am (UTC)(link)
I can't wait to actually show her using them~!!! Hetlia has provided me with very minor support characters such as Tony, it would be a waste not to use him!! 8D

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-12-01 12:49 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, beta!anon comes back~

Fight sceeeenes, I'm so jealous you can write them as well as you do. Seriously. I second the liking England's power thing.

I didn't mention this, but I really like how Tony was the Luna character. I was assuming it'd be a minor character or something instead.

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-12-01 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
Hello again hun~!! Thanks for all your hard work on this chapter!! It really feels much smoother to me.

Action scenes are so fun/annoying. Its a very love hate relationship.

Glad you approve of my use of him!! I only remember him talking in one strip and he was cussing up a storm, I thought it would be great fun to use that!!

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-12-01 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
Omg yes Tony! This meme needs more Tony! I'm so loving this fill right now. I have to admit I was a lil bit creeped out by Alfred's obsession, but it's all good! Ok so three more sailor scouts right? so... Russia, China, and France?

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-12-02 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
We are in agreement! This meme definitely needs more Tony!! I hadn't initially planned on Alfred being that creepy, but that's just how it happened I guess. I'm glad it didn't scare you away though!!

OP Here!

(Anonymous) 2009-12-01 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
Ohh, interesting twist.

More soon, I hope?

Re: OP Here!

(Anonymous) 2009-12-02 06:25 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you approve OP~!!

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-12-01 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I have no idea what is going on, but it's awesome. Can't wait for more!

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-12-02 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
Hopefully things will start to get clearer soon? Thanks for sticking around though!!

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-12-06 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Anon, why so brilliant?

This has to be, hands down, the best Sailor Moon fusion ever. And believe me when I say this, for this anon has read far more Sailor Moon x-overs than she's proud to admit.

I wish I could go on and on for hours over the cleverness of this story (the post-apocalyptic setting, the genderbending, Al-the-creep, Tony) but words fail me right now, so I'll just be here F5ing 'till my finger is numb.

Keep on rocking, Anon! *lame thumbs-up goes here*

reCaptcha says: Presidential engage. Mmm... will the government get involved in this, captcha?

Re: Chapter 1d

(Anonymous) 2009-12-08 06:54 am (UTC)(link)
Ha ha, I don't know about brilliant, but thank you!!

I'm so happy that you're enjoying this so far! Its a stretch, even for me who is a rabid cross-over fan, but I wanted to give it a shot any way. And, I mean, Sailor Moon was originally sort of a post apocalyptic setting if you looked at it a certain way, but I don't think its common to associate it that way since its set in our time period. For that reason I thought it would give the fic a very fresh feel to it, something I think a lot of cross-overs lack these days. There's also the fact to consider that its a fusion request, not explicitly a crossover request, so that played in as well.

Now that I've said way to much my inner nerd is showing I have to tell you that genderbender is fun. That's really the only reason I have for that...Everything else is planned out, serious!! XD