“So, what brought this on?” England asked, amused, threading his hands through America’s silky hair.
“I told you. I’ve always wanted it. You’ve always wanted it. And I had a way to make it happen. Anyway, you know that saying: The couple who play together, stay together.” England chuckled, pressing a kiss to his forehead. America threaded their fingers together and kissed the back of his hand drowsily.
“Mm, sleepy.”
“Your body’s not used to sex. Go to sleep, and you’ll be back to normal when you wake up. Promise.”
“Aww,” America said, sounding disappointed, “Already? What if we wanted to have more mind-blowing sex?”
“I can only take one session of mind-blowing sex in a week. And you really need to go back to being you. Because that you is by far the best,” he said, nuzzling him. America blinked, and then smiled.
“Mmkay.” He seemed to think of something as an afterthought, because he blurted out, “…Still yours, y’know.”
“I know, America,” he said, hiding a smile in America’s hair. “I know.”
I feel so guilty loving this! I don't usually like shota, but your writing skills is making this pairing an exception to my rules... Darn you writer anon! *shakes angry fist* Totally bookmarking this btw.
As one commenter on an earlier fill with a similar going-to-hell premise said (paraphrased), "Why did this fill have to be so frightfully well-written that I have to live with the fact that it turned me on?"
So yes. I loved reading this even as my face was burning up and the tut-tutting of my conscience constantly echoing in my ears. The smut was fantastically hot and surprisingly sweet at the same time, and I have to admit that I find the idea of colonial!America with a devilish smirk on his face extremely tantalizing. And...yes, that's all I have to say.
Totally not guilty for going to hell because of this. IT WAS MIND-BLOWING!! Gosh, I've never known Pedo!kinks could be this HOT. I love you so much, anon.
I have like no shame left when it comes to fanfiction. Being involved in fanfiction in general for two almost three years does that to a girl. Especially when one used to read real person fic, gay incest avidly and now reads countries in orgies.
But enough about me. This is about you and your not-as-pedo-as-it-should-be shotafic. Seriously, this was amazing and delicious when it probably shouldn't have been. I love how it was all "sweet and innocent" with Alfred and then when he put on his glasses, it was like bam! Fourteen year old talking dirty to Iggy.
Britannia angel= perfect excuse for modern fantasies, yes?
Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2009-11-24 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)“I told you. I’ve always wanted it. You’ve always wanted it. And I had a way to make it happen. Anyway, you know that saying: The couple who play together, stay together.” England chuckled, pressing a kiss to his forehead. America threaded their fingers together and kissed the back of his hand drowsily.
“Mm, sleepy.”
“Your body’s not used to sex. Go to sleep, and you’ll be back to normal when you wake up. Promise.”
“Aww,” America said, sounding disappointed, “Already? What if we wanted to have more mind-blowing sex?”
“I can only take one session of mind-blowing sex in a week. And you really need to go back to being you. Because that you is by far the best,” he said, nuzzling him. America blinked, and then smiled.
“Mmkay.” He seemed to think of something as an afterthought, because he blurted out, “…Still yours, y’know.”
“I know, America,” he said, hiding a smile in America’s hair. “I know.”
Re: Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2009-11-25 04:23 am (UTC)(link)Totally bookmarking this btw.
Re: Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2009-11-25 05:08 am (UTC)(link)Re: Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2009-11-25 08:59 am (UTC)(link)So yes. I loved reading this even as my face was burning up and the tut-tutting of my conscience constantly echoing in my ears. The smut was fantastically hot and surprisingly sweet at the same time, and I have to admit that I find the idea of colonial!America with a devilish smirk on his face extremely tantalizing. And...yes, that's all I have to say.
*slinks away*
Re: Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2009-11-26 06:56 am (UTC)(link)THANK YOU ♥
Re: Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2009-11-27 04:46 am (UTC)(link)Re: Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2009-11-27 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)Re: Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2009-12-02 03:01 pm (UTC)(link)My bunk. Where is it.
Re: Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2010-04-26 04:12 am (UTC)(link)But enough about me. This is about you and your not-as-pedo-as-it-should-be shotafic. Seriously, this was amazing and delicious when it probably shouldn't have been. I love how it was all "sweet and innocent" with Alfred and then when he put on his glasses, it was like bam! Fourteen year old talking dirty to Iggy.
Britannia angel= perfect excuse for modern fantasies, yes?
Re: Innocent [5/5]
(Anonymous) 2014-07-24 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)