Thanks, and thanks for reading! I'm glad the "ah" bit worked out-- stream-of-consciousness style stuff like what I was going for can be very hit-or-miss, and knowing that didn't read too randomly, well...phew! The same with Conquistador!Spain. Reeeeeally hit-or-miss.
So, yeah! Thanks so much for the feedback, and thanks for reading!
Re: Pretty Little Things [Part 3, Historical Notes]
(Anonymous) 2009-11-24 04:54 am (UTC)(link)So, yeah! Thanks so much for the feedback, and thanks for reading!