eeeeh, this whole comment put a smile on my face! ♥♥♥ I'm glad you liked the ending, sadfd, I was just not sure it would do to end it like this after all the angst, but I wanted to end it on a happier note; plus, I cannot really see Arthur as anything other than a hot old experienced bastard, so of course he would take control, especially their first time. As for 'Iggy'; I wanted Alfred to bastardize one of Arthur's names to annoy him, and honestly, I thought canon was safer than attempting something on my own.
Ahaha, I can't help the Britishisms, sometimes; I tend to think that way, so I don't even notice; I'll try to keep track of them in the future. I also tend to think in Greek as well (greek!anon is greek) so maybe that's why some of the sentences sounded awkward in english. My translation skills aren't the best. I'm glad you think my characterizations are okay, though! It's the hardest part to get right; the other things can be improved, but if you can't get the characters right it's..difficult.
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(Anonymous) 2009-04-26 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)Ahaha, I can't help the Britishisms, sometimes; I tend to think that way, so I don't even notice; I'll try to keep track of them in the future. I also tend to think in Greek as well (greek!anon is greek) so maybe that's why some of the sentences sounded awkward in english. My translation skills aren't the best. I'm glad you think my characterizations are okay, though! It's the hardest part to get right; the other things can be improved, but if you can't get the characters right it's..difficult.
aaaalso. you sound familiar, I think~