Perfect. Perfect Perfect. Everything was absolutely perfect! I didn't think it'd be possible to keep England & France in-character for this request, but you pulled that off wonderfully, especially for the proposal scene. And I also got the bittersweet ending I asked for:
"He dared not move nor part his gaze from Arthur's eyes in case they were the last visage he would ever gaze upon." I loved this line in particular. It just broke my heart~
And oddly enough, I also liked the interaction with Ludwig and Gilbert. They were wonderfully in-character too (Oh, Gilbert. You sooo deserved that.)
Anyway, thanks so much for the amazing fill, author!anon. You just made my night.
OP
(Anonymous) 2009-03-11 02:59 am (UTC)(link)I didn't think it'd be possible to keep England & France in-character for this request, but you pulled that off wonderfully, especially for the proposal scene. And I also got the bittersweet ending I asked for:
"He dared not move nor part his gaze from Arthur's eyes in case they were the last visage he would ever gaze upon."
I loved this line in particular. It just broke my heart~
And oddly enough, I also liked the interaction with Ludwig and Gilbert. They were wonderfully in-character too (Oh, Gilbert. You sooo deserved that.)
Anyway, thanks so much for the amazing fill, author!anon. You just made my night.
Happy author!anon
(Anonymous) 2009-03-11 03:04 am (UTC)(link)