- "I'm surprised this doesn't happen more often" Gilbert - "Oh my grandma hires him" and Lovino's reaction - Gilbert getting all OMG THE MESS IN HERE WHAT DID YOU DO?! and being a fastidious German in general - Lovino's homesickness, especially the culture clash - being unfamiliar with gestures and body language, hating the food, having problems with the language - How everything just gels perfectly to keep the misunderstanding going. You've got a real knack for that, it's very organic and doesn't feel forced or contrived.
Re: A Clean Sweep 3b/5
- "I'm surprised this doesn't happen more often" Gilbert
- "Oh my grandma hires him" and Lovino's reaction
- Gilbert getting all OMG THE MESS IN HERE WHAT DID YOU DO?! and being a fastidious German in general
- Lovino's homesickness, especially the culture clash - being unfamiliar with gestures and body language, hating the food, having problems with the language
- How everything just gels perfectly to keep the misunderstanding going. You've got a real knack for that, it's very organic and doesn't feel forced or contrived.
Looking forward to reading more :)