“don't try to tell me you think it's all physical” ah ha, so that's why Affair of the Heart is appropriate! So much Rick Springfield, it's like I'm a teenager again..
Mariel was Philippines, wasn't she? You added an 'L' to her usual human name. This the second epic fic that has them as an off-screen pre-fic ship that fails. I'd suspect you of being the author of the other one, but you already said you don't do long fics often.
It's odd, Poland seems more manly, but still a himbo. His mental image feels like Kato Kaelin.
"To be a true Cubs fan, you have to be patient."
*cough*
*cough*
Pretty sure there are nudists who would wear no clothes BUT HAVE ARMSTRAPS for their phones.
'Lawyers in Love' is a song! (How hard did you have to resist making Alfred a lawyer too, so you could name this fic after that song?)
Thank you so much for writing! The only critique I can think of is that you do mental angst extremely well, but seem to let up on the pressure and start to drift when things are happy.
Re: All Right, Tonight (Part 62/62)
Mariel was Philippines, wasn't she? You added an 'L' to her usual human name. This the second epic fic that has them as an off-screen pre-fic ship that fails. I'd suspect you of being the author of the other one, but you already said you don't do long fics often.
It's odd, Poland seems more manly, but still a himbo. His mental image feels like Kato Kaelin.
"To be a true Cubs fan, you have to be patient."
*cough*
*cough*
Pretty sure there are nudists who would wear no clothes BUT HAVE ARMSTRAPS for their phones.
'Lawyers in Love' is a song! (How hard did you have to resist making Alfred a lawyer too, so you could name this fic after that song?)
Thank you so much for writing! The only critique I can think of is that you do mental angst extremely well, but seem to let up on the pressure and start to drift when things are happy.