This was really cute. And funny, too! I love the mentions of Prussia teaching Germany how to get out of knots, and Prussia’s very effective “interrogation” tactic. Because who can stand firm in the face of delicious, delicious beer. I’m looking forward to the next part (and very curious about the story of Prussia’s)! Great job!
As a side note, I wouldn’t worry about the accents. Personally, I find them distracting when they’re written out, and that it takes away from the flow of the story.
Re: Fill- Big Brother 1b/2
As a side note, I wouldn’t worry about the accents. Personally, I find them distracting when they’re written out, and that it takes away from the flow of the story.