Not OP, but I totally love the hand!porn. I think you did a good job even though you didn't follow the request to the letter, it's still good. I've never read RusHun before. But, I liked this.

I know exactly what you mean with the stick-phrase problem. That happens to me from time to time. It usually causes me to explain further and further until my stories get insanely long--not sure how that works, but it happens.