Well, finally I read a fanfic about Russia, who actually likes Belarus (as it's IRL), though not quite aware of it. Thank you, author! It was very funny and cute <3
I hope you'll not object to a few corrections.

I think that the title "Пробуждение" would have been more correct than the "Побудка"
побудка = reveille

"Здравствуйте" is too formal greetings to your beloved. The word "Здравствуй" is more suitable in this situation.

And I noticed some typos and slight mistakes:

вечерОм, not вечерАм

А я тебе ведь сказала, что этО плохая мысль.
(it would be better to replace the word "сказала" with the word "говорила")

And the sentence "Did I say something" more properly translated as "Я что-нибудь говОрил?" or "Я что-нибудь сказал?"


I am sorry for my poor English and the possible mistakes >.<