Lovelovelovelovelovelove love this story! I love the little details you put into everything, like when Alfred was learning swordplay and archery (both of which I have learned and I can completely sympathize with Alfred) and Alfred's point of view about everything, which is wonderful, and Alfred and Arthur's relationship, which is the best they are the best and you write them as the best, and Adain and Aengus and they're fabulous and it's fabulous and I just can't wait for everything to come to a head and yeah.

Brilliant story, I'll stop rambling now.