He supposed he did have one more weapon now; his blood. Now his boasting words to Connall didn’t seem quite so empty, as it turned out his blood actually was useful. Though… it was bizarre, why didn’t Adain get hurt by it then when he was doing that whole, ‘what do you mean you’re not wearing plate armor?’ thing? As a being made of magic, wouldn’t that be more painful for him than it was for the giant bird? None of this made any sense!
Completely flummoxed, Alfred found a marginally comfortable spot on the rocks, and despite the sun, went to sleep.
Hello everyone! Bet you didn’t see this coming. I’ve had this planned for a long while. We just needed to strip him of even more of his comfort zone. Also, Alfred’s food choices are what someone would legitly take backpacking, kinda.
We are now running completely self betaed… Unfortunately my beta can no longer do the job and I am in the process of finding a new one… So hopefully there is not an extreme drop in quality. Hopefully my long ANs are the only thing with excessive grammar mistakes. XP
Yes, it was the Hans Christian Anderson nightingale! And yes, it was Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird. Great job guys!
Anon 1: You are so close on a lot of points it was kinda scary… Hope you stick around to see how they’re applied! I’ve had stuff planned for a while, so I almost choked when I read your comment.
Anon 2: <3 Sorry, but you’re in for a bit of a wait. Though we will see a smidgeon of possibly real Arthur next chapter. You’re amazing for reviewing too!
Perpetually Last Anon: You know Old English… marry me? Though if you used the translator I don’t blame you. I went through and actually matched the stupid feminine and masculine words up to the dragon sexes. Every “made up” name was fire related, great job on catching that. The ones you didn’t get exactly correct: Sweoloþ: burning heat, flame glow; Heaðufýr: cruel fire; Rhag tân: fire; Bælegsa: terror of fire. Cool about the lefty thing, haha though in my regional slang, we used southpaw before knowing it came from baseball!
Puzzle: Two movie references here, one Alfred does deliberately, one’s in the phrasing or word choice. What are they?
Reviews are love. I’m interested on what you think about the sword.
Crowe 11h/?
Completely flummoxed, Alfred found a marginally comfortable spot on the rocks, and despite the sun, went to sleep.
Hello everyone! Bet you didn’t see this coming. I’ve had this planned for a long while. We just needed to strip him of even more of his comfort zone. Also, Alfred’s food choices are what someone would legitly take backpacking, kinda.
We are now running completely self betaed… Unfortunately my beta can no longer do the job and I am in the process of finding a new one… So hopefully there is not an extreme drop in quality. Hopefully my long ANs are the only thing with excessive grammar mistakes. XP
Yes, it was the Hans Christian Anderson nightingale! And yes, it was Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird. Great job guys!
Anon 1: You are so close on a lot of points it was kinda scary… Hope you stick around to see how they’re applied! I’ve had stuff planned for a while, so I almost choked when I read your comment.
Anon 2: <3 Sorry, but you’re in for a bit of a wait. Though we will see a smidgeon of possibly real Arthur next chapter. You’re amazing for reviewing too!
Perpetually Last Anon: You know Old English… marry me? Though if you used the translator I don’t blame you. I went through and actually matched the stupid feminine and masculine words up to the dragon sexes. Every “made up” name was fire related, great job on catching that. The ones you didn’t get exactly correct: Sweoloþ: burning heat, flame glow; Heaðufýr: cruel fire; Rhag tân: fire; Bælegsa: terror of fire. Cool about the lefty thing, haha though in my regional slang, we used southpaw before knowing it came from baseball!
Puzzle: Two movie references here, one Alfred does deliberately, one’s in the phrasing or word choice. What are they?
Reviews are love. I’m interested on what you think about the sword.