(A certain someone from a certain LJ comm appears!)

I had to use half a box of Kleenex on my nosebleed after reading this, I'll have you know. I HOPE YOU'RE PROUD OF YOURSELF. (Just kidding, you're awesome!)

He felt head beginning to coil in his belly. - I'm pretty sure you meant "heat" in this sentence, but other than that, everything's great and hot and fluffsmutty I don't even care that that's not a word.

Hope to see another update soon!