I like the start of this, author!anon. I don't know much about Molossia (or even most of the micronations), but he seems really cool! This looks really interesting!
(And as a native American English speaker, your English is pretty darn good! My only suggestion would be to put spaces between paragraphs.
Like this, so there's a line in between for the readers to know it's a new sentence. Just a small suggestion, though! Keep up the good work otherwise!)
Re: Untitled, Chapter 1 Notes
(And as a native American English speaker, your English is pretty darn good! My only suggestion would be to put spaces between paragraphs.
Like this, so there's a line in between for the readers to know it's a new sentence. Just a small suggestion, though! Keep up the good work otherwise!)