This is FANTASTIC. Really. I love your characterization and your story line and your Norway and mostly your Finland--oh, the line about him being the Noah of Ugly things had me rolling!
This is great. You should be proud of yourself for this, especially being your first shot. I'm happy you're sticking with this story and you've done an excellent job so far. Never apologize for length! It's great. I am definitely looking forward to more! :)
I love your SwedenxFinland in this, too. So excellent.
Re: Untitled, Part 4/? E and Thank Yous
This is FANTASTIC. Really. I love your characterization and your story line and your Norway and mostly your Finland--oh, the line about him being the Noah of Ugly things had me rolling!
This is great. You should be proud of yourself for this, especially being your first shot. I'm happy you're sticking with this story and you've done an excellent job so far. Never apologize for length! It's great. I am definitely looking forward to more! :)
I love your SwedenxFinland in this, too. So excellent.