Oh! Okay, first off, Urgh! I can't believe how long this was up here before I read it! I just happened to be checking this, how could I miss this in the fill list? Op is blind x_x sorry!
Anyways! I'M IN LOVE! This was so romantic and lovely! I don't even know what I could say to express how much I love your style of writing and your characterization of Peter and Ravis <3 Also, I really like their pre-marital relationship. I love this line: They’ve been professing their love for each other since they were little (Or, rather, Peter was) and didn’t know the difference between platonic love and romantic love. And my heart melted at this line: Basically, they were making love since before they knew what the difference was. And this is one of the factors that convince Peter and his romantic mind that he and Raivis are meant to be.
I really love that throughout their relationship they did find out more about each other and themselves, and their feeling were always genuine throughout everything.
And aww at Ravis' past. I love his strength.
And omg realistic condom/birth-control talk! And wow, pregnancy scare of the century (now I'm kind of curious of what how everything went down then) I also LOLed at Peter's line about Ravis sounding like his mom, and aww at the married couple line after that <3
And OMG the smuff (smutt/fluff) So freakin' hot, sexy, and romantic! LoL about the whole ship/boat possibly hearing them.
All in all, I'm incredibly happy about this update! It was brilliant, and I can't wait until the next update.
Re: One To Call His Own - Part 2f/?
Anyways! I'M IN LOVE! This was so romantic and lovely! I don't even know what I could say to express how much I love your style of writing and your characterization of Peter and Ravis <3 Also, I really like their pre-marital relationship. I love this line:
They’ve been professing their love for each other since they were little (Or, rather, Peter was) and didn’t know the difference between platonic love and romantic love.
And my heart melted at this line: Basically, they were making love since before they knew what the difference was. And this is one of the factors that convince Peter and his romantic mind that he and Raivis are meant to be.
I really love that throughout their relationship they did find out more about each other and themselves, and their feeling were always genuine throughout everything.
And aww at Ravis' past. I love his strength.
And omg realistic condom/birth-control talk! And wow, pregnancy scare of the century (now I'm kind of curious of what how everything went down then) I also LOLed at Peter's line about Ravis sounding like his mom, and aww at the married couple line after that <3
And OMG the smuff (smutt/fluff) So freakin' hot, sexy, and romantic! LoL about the whole ship/boat possibly hearing them.
All in all, I'm incredibly happy about this update! It was brilliant, and I can't wait until the next update.