AWESOME XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD yes, FrUK shipper is obviousXD
I think you nailed their reactions, author anon. Matt's rage and difficulty with dealing with his emotions was perfect; I cheered when he threw himself at Ivan, not even thinking about the consequences. The ending made my heart clench, his grief was so palpable...even if you went a bit over-the-top with the children's books, a bit too melodramaticXD
Ivan, on the contrary, seems to be at a loss, and it fits so well with him! A powerful man, used to be in control, to change things to his liking, who now sees everything disappear without anything he can do...the info blackness must be driving him mad. Ah, Ivan, you should have told sooner...now it's all worse. What will he do? I loved when he got angry when Matt accused him of lying and taking advantage of Al! that was sexy!
Oh, and I love officer Kirkland; not only is picturing the character like that hot, but his atittude always amuses meXD
It had always struck Ivan as odd that Francis never mixed the twins up. Ever. He could come across one when he was expecting to find the other, and still not make a mistake.
I loved this. Even in the midst of all this big plot developments, little things like this say so much about the characters...Francs, for all his flirting, is observant ^^
Something tells me that Al will actually have a great time kidnapped by the Italian brosXD. If everything wasn't broken at the bar, I'd have said he didn't know he'd been kidnapped! I wonder who captured him; not the Italian boys, that's for sure. He'll probably feel worse about Ivan's lies than about being kidnapped...
Re: Bratva 19d/??
“Well hello, officer~”
Kirkland eyed him. “I beg your pardon?”
“Oh. British.”
AWESOME XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
yes, FrUK shipper is obviousXD
I think you nailed their reactions, author anon. Matt's rage and difficulty with dealing with his emotions was perfect; I cheered when he threw himself at Ivan, not even thinking about the consequences. The ending made my heart clench, his grief was so palpable...
even if you went a bit over-the-top with the children's books, a bit too melodramaticXDIvan, on the contrary, seems to be at a loss, and it fits so well with him! A powerful man, used to be in control, to change things to his liking, who now sees everything disappear without anything he can do...the info blackness must be driving him mad. Ah, Ivan, you should have told sooner...now it's all worse. What will he do? I loved when he got angry when Matt accused him of lying and taking advantage of Al!
that was sexy!Oh, and I love officer Kirkland; not only is picturing the character like that hot, but his atittude always amuses meXD
It had always struck Ivan as odd that Francis never mixed the twins up. Ever. He could come across one when he was expecting to find the other, and still not make a mistake.
I loved this. Even in the midst of all this big plot developments, little things like this say so much about the characters...Francs, for all his flirting, is observant ^^
Something tells me that Al will actually have a great time kidnapped by the Italian brosXD. If everything wasn't broken at the bar, I'd have said he didn't know he'd been kidnapped! I wonder who captured him; not the Italian boys, that's for sure. He'll probably feel worse about Ivan's lies than about being kidnapped...