Heh, the term "first person narrative" has never been so awesome, anon! And god, so sexy and full of UST; I bet his editor is going to wonder why his writing changed, eh? XD

And Wylie's an awesome name for Australia; I'm so uncreative that I would just go with "Jack" or something myself, but I like yours! And zookeeper is an awesome AU job for him; little kids must adore him. Peter's going to want to spend every day with him, yeah?