God, this fic. It's heartbreaking, but morbidly interesting. I think all of us are going to hell with you, so don't worryXD

America's reticence about talking of that mixed with his matter-of-fact atittude are tragic. Poor kid! Now I wonder when he started to decide to have kids; I also wonder when was the first time he enjoyed sex. Or is he still getting pregnant beyond his control? Like, he slept with Russia recently because he desired it and accidentaly got knocked up again with Alaska? and why the hell is everybody such an asshole toward him and the kids they get in his belly? I get why England wasn't there; also Netherlands. But where are Japan, Russia, etc?

I kinda feel for England, so far, since he didn't know anything; but...well, he's gonna have a lot more kids with America still incredibly young. Poor America's proudful and practical motives for not telling him still don't excuse his disappearance...I wonder if he'll come back when he hears from Netherlands what happened betwen him and America? And Ned, you bastard, you could have made it feel good, at least a little. (but then again, that was brilliance on your part, because not only is Netherlands very big and America's body clearly too young for pleasurable sex, but also, a subordinate's feelings -and colonies were that in that day- are not something the master concerns himself with. Indignant, but so true)

A little critic, though; you may try to flesh out Virginia and America's future kids a bit more. I just got a vagueness of a child, instead of a defined young individual. I'd love to read about Virginia, not "a kid". Pointing out the things she's inherited from her other dad would be an awesome touch, too!
This fic is great. Update soon, please! ^^