Very well done and descriptive. I could see how in a moment of weakness Alfred could be coaxed into trusting Arthur...
My only problem with this was the ending. What would trigger Alfred into wanting to fight England again? Unless this is an alternate universe where America doesn't win independence?
But don't get me wrong. I did overall really like this fill. :)
Re: [Part 18] Remember Your Place (11 - FINAL)
My only problem with this was the ending. What would trigger Alfred into wanting to fight England again? Unless this is an alternate universe where America doesn't win independence?
But don't get me wrong. I did overall really like this fill. :)