According to OP request, this fanfiction had huge potential in turning in good fic, and you did good job for first chapter, Italy partner choice is cute(not that I ship them) but it's quite oposite from Germany which would made him even more jealous and sad. Still this is beginning lots of stuff needs to happen and I hope for cute Happy-GerIta-Ending here~ but in the middle angst is good. Still happy ending is happy ending!!! Still I am not OP and I have nothing to say in this. :X

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I hope you will update next chapter soon ;)