i really like this, your writing is so... casual? natural? hahah, sorry, dunno how to describe it in english, but i love it! even though i don't know much of the things mentioned (some band names? "gossip girl"?) it feels lively when you use stuff like that!
and i lolled so hard at Cubanz69: HEY U BASTRED I KNO U CHETED ON COUNTERSTRIKE pfff
shortly, LOTS of love for you! ♥ ♥ can't wait to read more~