Oh *anon*. Your imagery is so gorgeous, and the emotions that run through this are poignant and perfect. My heart was in my throat the whole time - especilly 2 and 4. It wasn't overly done or sappy, just the lyrical, beautiful aching truth of the way Ludwig in love *would be*. I love this so much anon. Love this pairing, love the way you portrayed them. Serious business!cooking!France is a major kink of mine. I love the sincere quality of Germany's *appreciation* for France's personality, beyond the nympho caricature. Everything about this was lovely.

I wonder, are you a native english speaker? There were a few quirks that made me think you might not be, or at least using an overzealous spellchecker that replaced words occasionally. Honestly, the writing was so good that it didn't detract from it much; but if you do non-anon writing in this fandom, I'd be delighted to beta for you if you wanted.