*purrs* No, this was really good. You so don't fail! In fact, it's one of the better non-cons I've seen. America would be quiet I think, doing his best to grit his teeth and take himself away from the situation, to not give in to his captor. I don't think he'd be bawling or screaming about it; doesn't seem in character. This, with his reactions and thoughts, was much better. I loved it!