Seriously. The plot was rich and had the potential to be unclear- but you made it beautiful as well as easy to follow (and become engrossed by). The imagery was complex but vivid and the characterisations...
by God, anon. So many authors would stumble on it. But no- you did not. You made them really real.
Have you written any other stories on the kink meme? Or do you mind linking me to anything you've done already? I know it's meant to be anonymous, but I am INCREDIBLY impressed. Beyond that- I want to read more of your work.
*Roaring applause*
Seriously. The plot was rich and had the potential to be unclear- but you made it beautiful as well as easy to follow (and become engrossed by). The imagery was complex but vivid and the characterisations...
by God, anon. So many authors would stumble on it. But no- you did not. You made them really real.
Have you written any other stories on the kink meme? Or do you mind linking me to anything you've done already? I know it's meant to be anonymous, but I am INCREDIBLY impressed. Beyond that- I want to read more of your work.
Xx Anon