The line is supposed to be “Your concern is so attractive, my cannonball." with 'my cannonball' in French. It doesn't have to be, but I thought the French spin would kind of be a nice closing to the fill. It doesn't have to be 'my' either, could be 'dear' or something else. If it really doesn't work, that's ok XD but I'll take your suggestion and ask another Frenchanon for help too
I'd be honoured to link you! lol, I've finished writing it, just need this last detail and I'll post it.
Re: French Beta
The line is supposed to be “Your concern is so attractive, my cannonball." with 'my cannonball' in French. It doesn't have to be, but I thought the French spin would kind of be a nice closing to the fill. It doesn't have to be 'my' either, could be 'dear' or something else. If it really doesn't work, that's ok XD but I'll take your suggestion and ask another Frenchanon for help too
I'd be honoured to link you! lol, I've finished writing it, just need this last detail and I'll post it.